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🦋Kookiess_07 He's My Next Door
Title: 2/5
Cover: 4/5
Genre: 4/5
Blurb: 2/5
Introduction: 4/10
Grammar/Punctuation: 8/20
Spelling/Vocabulary: 10/20
Plot: 15/30
Character Development: 5/10
Description: 5/10
Connectivity: 1/5
Effective Literary Device: 6/10
Originality: 5/5
Overall Enjoyment: 4/10
Total: 75/150
cassandracas1: The poor grammar and lack of cohesiveness made me disinterested and lost.
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🦋Rita_Bl Dusk To Dawn
Title: 5/5
Cover: 2/5
Genre: 5/5
Blurb: 3/5
Introduction: 7/10
Grammar/Punctuation: 16/20
Spelling/Vocabulary: 18/20
Plot: 22/30
Character Development: 6/10
Description: 5/10
Connectivity: 3/5
Effective Literary Devices: 5/10
Originality: 4/5
Overall Enjoyment: 8/10
Total: 110/150
FionaCakes91: This story was cute and sweet. I loved the writer's sense of humour, they had me laughing up a storm. I admired the way the characters interacted with each other, it felt natural and very relatable. The dialects flowed beautifully and those parts are where the humour was at its peak. However, the first problem I had was with the cover, I know it's hard to find the perfect cover for your books, but this one was just not it. I wanted to see one of the guys from OD, the book was about them after all. The blurb needed a little more flavour. The intro had me on the edge of my seat, but I felt it could have been better with a little more emotional descriptions, I wanted to feel what Louis felt while he was getting whipped; you could have made the scene a little more chilling. A lot of punctuation errors. Spellings and vocabulary were good. Now I loved the whole mystery surrounding the mystery guy who saved Harry in the beginning, but again you needed to describe the scene a bit more. Describe Harry's body trembling. The turmoil he had within himself at the time. The way he was terrified of the man with flaming, fiery red hair, but at the same time, he was focused on the attractive ocean eyes man who saved him like he was a damsel in distress. You had the ingredients, you just needed to find the right recipe and be bolder with your descriptions. Anyway, I still enjoyed reading this book. You are a good writer. Just keep writing.
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🦋The_Real_Weeb The Strongest Word
Title: 4/5
Cover: 3/5
Genre: 3/5
Blurb: 3/5
Intro: 6/10
Grammar/Punctuation: 15/20
Spelling/Vocabulary: 16/20
Plot: 25/30
Character Development: 8/10
Description: 8/10
Connectivity: 3/5
Effective Literary Devices: 5/10
Originality: 5/5
Overall Enjoyment: 7/10
Total: 111/150
cassandracas1: Apart from being thrown off by the names, I enjoyed reading.
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🦋Anora0901 Sincerely Yours
Title: 4/5
Cover: 4/5
Genre: 5/5
Blurb: 4/5
Introduction: 6/10
Grammar/ Punctuation: 17/20
Spelling/ Vocabulary: 17/20
Plot: 25/30
Character Development: 7/10
Description: 8/10
Connectivity: 3/5
Effective Literary Device: 5/10
Originality: 5/5
Overall Enjoyment: 7/10
Total: 117/150
cassandracas1: I liked the writer's take on Khushi's and Arnav's love story.
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Title: 5/5
Cover: 4/5
Genre: 4/5
Blurb: 3/5
Introduction: 7/10
Grammar/Punctuation: 18/20
Spelling/Vocabulary: 19/20
Plot: 21/30
Character Development: 10/10
Description: 8/10
Connectivity: 4/5
Effective Literary Devices: 6/10
Originality: 5/5
Overall Enjoyment: 6/10
Total: 120/150
cassandracas1: The character intro made me want to read the book.
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🦋asthkook Pain Brings True Love
Title: 5/5
Cover: 5/5
Genre: 5/5
Blurb: 3/5
Introduction: 10/10
Grammar/Punctuation: 15/20
Spelling/Vocabulary: 18/20
Plot: 25/30
Character Development: 7/10
Description: 7/10
Connectivity: 4/5
Effective Literary Devices: 5/10
Originality: 5/5
Overall Enjoyment: 7/10
Total: 121/150
FionaCakes91: The cover was perfect, very attractive. The blurb, however, was too long and it needed editing. I saw a few misspelt words and a few grammar problems. The originality of this story was excellent and it started with a bang for me. It had suspense, I wanted to know why they were fighting and who would win the argument. Moving on to the following chapters I found too many grammar mistakes. The writer kept mixing past and present tense, which I admit I do this a lot too. My advice is, after you write a chapter, read it out loud and see if it flows easily off your tongue (it might sound weird, but it works for me). The plot was fascinating, it had me rooting for the two protagonists, they both were forced into a situation that they despised but sometimes when life gives you lemons you just have to make lemonade, at least that's what they did. I enjoyed your story, it was crazy but beautiful.
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