I am sorry that the chapters have been coming out slow and that the adventure hasn't even started. I am very sorry that the chapters have been less than 1500 words, I will try harder to make longer and better chapters because I know that you all will enjoy it more if I did try to over 2000 words. I hope that you all are enjoying the story, and I am happy that you have stuck through this sorry attempt at this. Tell me what I can improve on, please just tell me, I can take it... I love all of you guys and thank you for 150 reads, you guys are the reason that i haven't given up on writing, haven't given up on myself. Tell me what i can improve on please, i know that i have asked this of you in the past but I haven't gotten results. Just tell me, because the criticism that I give myself isn't enough. <3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3
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Fanfictionafter their home is destroyed suddenly by an evil drake from the south the dwarfs of erabor are flung into a terrible quest led to reclaim their land led by thorin oakenshield, followed by 13 faithful dwarfs, a single little hobbit, and one very ano...
