Comma part 1

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POV: Yo and soctraes ar FINE ALLY back 2getha < 3 but oh no.... nmaybe docrates was right to be scarred, bc he got PLAGUE!!!! :,( how will u cope whilst ur hubby is in comma??? read to find out 👀👀👀👀

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u wake up on a sunny morning, the sun shining britely thru the window. when ther is nock on door.

K*NOCK KNOCK*

You get up out of bed and wlak ova to the door to ansewr tha knoc.

Y/N: h-ello?

a sweaty man stands at the door.

Messenger: behold! a messssadge from SOCREATES!

Y/N: *scared* w-what? is soctreats oka??

Messenger; he is fine!

Y/N: Thank goodness!

reliefed, u go to close the door when the sweat man holds the door open. 

messenger: wait. he is in comma

Y/N: WHAT?!?!?!??!?!?!?!?

meesssenger: b4 he passed into comma he seid to tell u to visiit him in hospital (**that's greek for hospital)

you burge thru the doorway, shofing messenga out of the awy as u run all the way to soctra. every1 in athens GAWKS at u as u run, they are so shocked by a woman running full speed!!!! usually only men run. but u MUST see ur belovvvrd husbby ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!


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AT THE HOSPITAL...

Y/N: soc..... (gently weeps into hospital bedsheets)

Soc: .... (hecant talk hes in comma remember)

then, alkeybeeaides wallks in!!!!!! u gasp

y/n: GASP!

Al key: yes, tis me. ur husbsands faivourite student! we kissed once lol

y/N: UR LYING!

Al key: IM NOT LYING!!!!!! WATCH THIS!!!!!!!!!!!

al key purses his lips and leans in to the unconshias soctrates - he is goig to KIS HIM!!!!! - but u push him outta tha way just in time so he ends up kisssing urhand insted. 

yN: GET OT OF THIS ROOM RIT NOW!!!!!!!!!

lick a sad puppy, al key leaves room with his tail betwn his legs.

YN: soru had to c that, ocreates...

Soc: ... (hecant talk hes in comma remember - do i rly hav to remind u this, dear reader/?????)

y/N: o soc.... i dont kno how i wil ogo on without u.... i life for u and ur philosophy!!!!!! i cannot bear to do this without u......

soc begins to breath rapidly! oh no, is he dying??????

his eyes open - thank goodness, he is not dying, he is waking up!

YN: SOCTREAEEEEEEEES!!!!!!!!!!! UR AWAKE!!!!!!! I MISSED U!!!!!!!!!

you go to kiss ur husband, when he stops u.

soc: who are you?

yn: W     H     A      T    ?!??!?!?!?!!?!?!?!?!?!?!!?!

soc: where am i? why are u tying to kis m?? who are u???

yN: i am ur wife, [yur name]! u are in hospital bcu got plague!

soc: i dont hav a wife... do i?

yN: do u not rereemeberme, soc??

Soc: um..... it's lily, right?

yN: NO!!!!!

soctreas; anna?

Y/N: NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!

socrate: mary? sue? jane? marie?

Y/N: NONE OF THOSE ARE MY NAME!!!!!!!!!!!

soc: i dont remember u im sowwy....

y/N; AUTSYBAtuDSNRWIMEAK (is so sad cant even speak words :( )

socreta: wait!!!! are u a nurse??? i need more ice 

y/N: i am not nurse... i am wifu :(

soctrea: o yeah. but i thot i didnt hav wife???

y/N: im leaifing now this is tooo sad

soc: okay


u leaf, crying like sad woman, becuz ur husband - ur purpose inlife - doenst remember who u are


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TO BE CONTINUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEED :DDDDDD


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