Marital Masterpiece

Original Idea

Hello readers!

Well, I'm just gonna be talking about my original idea for this book.

First of all, you may not have liked KiyoSuzu ship and I understand that. That's why I thought my original idea was good not until I saw many positive comments before.

Of course, I would say that I am very flattered and happy to know someone enjoys my book even though I wouldn't normally care if you hate it too. I'm just glad that you enjoy it. It's your business if you don't enjoy it.

Anyway, as I said this will be about my original idea for this book.

This story was actually made for Kiyotaka to slowly make Suzune fall for him through the help of the girls he managed to date or charm.

In my original idea, I wanted Suzune to be very tsundere and loudere sometimes that she won't even flinch no matter what kind of sweet talks Kiyotaka does but would internally fangirl about him and be very deredere.

You've read my Chapter 1, 2, and 3, and you might have noticed how I made Kiyotaka the one who made many romantic or flirty moves in which Suzune only barely reacts too outside. I really wanted it to be slow-romance for them.

In fact, I only twisted some details in Chapter 3 when I realized that I couldn't have made a slow-romance reasonable if Kiyotaka already dates and have experience everything with other girls like dates, kissing, cuddling, and sex. It would have to be angst and dramatic. I couldn't have written that since I have grudges against angst stories.

So, I changed it to the current route where they both change their approach to each other where Suzune tries to be tsundere but fails because she loves him too much.

In my original idea, Kiyotaka will first befriend Kikyou and by extension, he will get to know Mei (Mii-chan). He'll slowly try to get accustomed to them and manages to shift Mei's attraction from Yousuke to him. In this, I imagine Kikyou to slowly feel frustrated since she notices the two getting closer without knowing why.

This leads to the rooftop incident where Kikyou lays her hatred for everyone because she's not good enough. Like I said beforee in another explanation, Kikyou also hates herself and realizes how painful it is to hate someone but she can't stop.

Like what I had written, Kiyo would try to "persuade" her and scare her with his actions and says that he's attracted to her. It ends with a kiss that, like in here, breaks Kikyou and Mei's relationship as best friends.

With this, Kikyou would also start acting like his girlfriend, pushing Mei to a state of depression. Suzune would feel jealous and starts to realize her mistake of not chasing him or being truthful but her pride is not gonna let her confess to him. She would think that she wanted Kiyotaka to fall for her instead so she tries to inconspicuously attract Kiyo by acting loosely in front of him, giving reasons that they're married anyway.

Mei would slowly lose focus in her studies and would fail history/other subjects other than English. Kiyotaka would save her but Suzune would also support him since she wants to impress him.

Mei would be saved but she would only slightly feel relieved due to Kiyotaka's care. With Kiyotaka not knowing anything about girls, he would try to ask Kikyou, but Kikyou would be jealous and act like a Yandere. I imagined her forcing Kiyotaka to leave Mei for Kikyou.

Kiyotaka would agree since they used to be friends and back off. Kiyotaka would then go to dates with Kikyou while Kikyou would report to him her progress with Mei. However, he would soon find out that Kikyou lied to him about Mei's condition.

So he would secretly meet up with Mei and ask her what is wrong with her. Mei would shout at him with anger, sending him out of the room and cry in her sleep.