In a galaxy far far away ( Deku in Star Wars harem Story)

Rising malevolence part 1

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Narrators point of view

The clone Starfleet is under siege, dozens of republic ships have been destroyed in merciless surprise attacks that leave no survivors. rumours spread of a terrible new separatist weapon

In the face of growing fear, did your council send master plo koon to hunt down the malevolence before it can strike again

Back in Anakin's Starfleet

Anna can continue to explain the situation to the Jedi Council and the high Chancellor: and we have had no further contact with general plo koon. The absence of distress beacons indicate that his fleet was...

The Jedi knight slowed down his speaking as he looked in his Padawan who had worried expression plastic on her face. As much as Anakin didn't want to hurt her feelings he had to report what he believed happened: that his fleet was... Destroyed like the others we are about to repair a rescue mission

The high counsellor: hasn't clone intelligence reported that this weapon never leaves any survivors

Obi-Wan: The separatists are being unusually tidy. They don't want anyone knowing about this

Ahsoka looked around the Jedi knights and hi counsellor she couldn't believe what she was hearing they were basically saying that they should abandon master plo koon. Master Yoda was that only hope left for slithering hope that they would be able to rescue him

However master Yoda let her down: tragic are these losses, but prevent more we must.

Back with master plo koon things were getting worse the power was out in the air Lifepod along with life-support and communications so they only had less than an hour of oxygen with them. But the Jedi Master wasn't about to throw in the towel that easily encouraged what was left of his soldiers to maintain high spirits and get the power restored so that they were there to be found when someone eventually came to rescue them

Back with Anakin and ahsoka things weren't looking so well the Jedi had decided that a rescue mission would be too risky and instead decided to focus all their resources on defence for the next time the mystery weapon attacked

Ahsoka however wasn't having any of it, she followed her instincts and spoke up without thinking: wait! just because I haven't been any survivors before doesn't mean there's not gonna be any this time!

The silence that followed her outburst was nerve racking, ahsoka Eyes widened as she realised what she did she just broke protocol and spoke out against the Jedi Council and the supreme Chancellor. The Jedi Masters looked at each other rather displeased with the pedal ones attitude and disregard for protocol

The high Chancellor: boldly spoken for someone so young

Obi-Wan somewhat impressed with ahsoka speaking up: she is learning from Anakin

Anakin gave his Padawan a look of disappointment which she returned with a determined look not willing to apologise for what she said:  excuse my Padawan

The Chancellor: it is quite alright my boy, speaking of paddle ones I understand that master Yoda has a new one and he is with you right now is that correct?