Chapter 16: Storytelling, down a broken path towards memory lane

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(A/N: I own nothing, one piece is owned by whoever created one piece)

(A/N: Well, it's been a real fucking long time, but at least I finished this chapter, was thinking heavily on what direction and what events to add to this story along with a shit load of work I had to do which really fucking slowed me way more than I thought bruh)

The TeleHEAD Channel grew up pretty fucking good with 1.69k subscribers and 2.4 million views

This is the 3rd longest chapter I have written with 5,000+ words

Since this Big mom started to change for the better in this story, which is after Luffy's birth and kidnapping...

From Perospero(1st child) to Cinnamon (37th child), they will be the older siblings who had suffered a lot before Luffy's birth or big mom's change in attitude, the others wouldn't be as severe as them.

Idk why, but I'm tempted to make Cracker like Steve-o from Jackass, get into stupid stunts and shit and suffer injuries for the lols. Although he is super sensitive to pain...WHICH MAKES ME WANT TO WRITE A CHAPTER ABOUT IT EVEN MORE.

Snack is a sweet commander with a 600,000,000 beri bounty, so far, no devil fruit is shown so I think his combat skills are probably strong Haki and good swordsmanship.

Sum Theory: I feel like Smoothie has heterochromia with how she hides her other eye with her hair, or she never hid it in the first place, but when Killer revealed that Kidd stole a Poneglyph from one of Big mom's commander, which is most likely Smoothie, I think they got into a fight where Killer destroyed her other eye which caused her to use her bangs to cover up the scar.

Summary: Storytelling, Giants?!, Down a broken and ruined memory lane.

list of charlottes in this chapter because there's a lot of them: Luffy, Chiffon, Anglais, Opera, Smoothie, Katakuri, Snack, Cracker, Praline, Prim, Nutmeg, Harumeg, Allmeg, Fuyumeg, Basans, Normand, Panna, Perospero, Mont-d'or, Yuen, Dragee, Dolce, Viro

previously:

"How do you feel?" Flampe asked tilting her head at Luffy, his torturer just got tortured after all, bitch deserved it though.

"Hungry" he said bluntly while his stomach growled, not showing any signs of giving a shit of Porchemy's fate.

They sweat dropped at that.

PRESENT:

CHAPTER 16

After getting more food from the kitchen to feed their brother, they just stalled and chilled until one of their siblings who was on deck came down to tell them they could come back onto the deck again.

In the meantime, the younger siblings were in a circle with their older brother Luffy in the center while the older ones kept back in their sofas, coaches and seats

To kill time, The older siblings told him to talk about his journeys and enemies he has faced off in paradise, and sufficed to say...

They were all interested in his stories as he was the only Charlotte besides Chiffon that went on a journey.

"Then, we went to the reverse mountains to enter the GrandLine!" Luffy exclaimed while the child siblings were interested in the next part of the stories.

He finished telling his siblings about his adventures in Loguetown where he survived not only an execution attempt, but a Fucking Lighting strike.

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