Inner Critic Took A Good Hit

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Inner Critic: *looking all bruised*

Jasmine: The heck happened to you?

Inner Critic: This girl threw a brick at me, after I told her that her stories were awful. *spits a few loose teeth out*

Jasmine: You deserved it. You look like crap.

Inner Critic: Yeah, that brick really did me good.

Jasmine: Good. Now, beat it.

Inner Critic: *walks away*

Jasmine: I'll remind myself to beat him up later. He also criticized Maya's stories.




This story was written on Sunday, September 24th, 2023.

A/N Inner Critic really got walloped by that brick! If I had my way, I would dump hot water on him! Don't be a silent reader. Please leave feedback. Thanks.

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