.+*Horror Results*+.

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There were only two entries for this genre. You both did so well and I'm honored to have been able to read your book.

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🥈 Forever Falling by quirkyshortdumbo11

Score: 5.5

I liked the use of short chapters it added a certain level of suspense. The biggest reason I gave it a lower score was that there wasn't a consistent tense. It was a decent story. Some advice would be to make sure you have a little time to develop the characters and settings later on. Right now you only have two chapters so it's not that big of a deal but just a heads up. Other than that you have a lot of potential.


🥇 Potatoes and Undeath by @DalisJamesBunch

Score: 8.5

I really liked this anthology. The stories were actually pretty scary and had quite a few turns throughout. The first story was wonderfully written, who knew a horror story about potatoes would work but you did it. Brilliant writing!


Congratualtions both of you!!

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