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Avni :-  Bhai , Neil ji bhi araha hai humare saat .

Abhimanyu  :- Araha hai ? Kaha pe Avii ?

Avni :- Wo maine kaha ki , hum dono long drive pe jaa raha hai toh Neil ji bhi kaha wo bhi hume join karega...

Abhimanyu :-  Acha ....ispe bolne wala kaunsi badi baat hai Avii . Toh boldo Neil ko hum start hogai ghar se .

Avni  :- Ha maine message kardi Bhai .

Abhimanyu :-  Teek hai .

Avni  :- Aapne Papa se kehdi kya humare Train journey ki bare main ?

Abhimanyu :-  Ha .
Papa ne accept kardi par Dadi kush nehi hai ye decision se .
Papa ne kahi Dadi flight pe ayegi sare relatives ke saat .

Avni  :- Mujhe pata hai , Dadi accept nehi karegi iske liye .

Abhimanyu  :- Par mana bhi nehi kiyi na . Hum jaa sakta hai ab bhi Avii .
Kal mein tickets book karuga .

Avni  :- Teek hai bhai , par kya aap Soma keliye bhi ticket book karega kya !
Wo bhi humare saat ane wali hai .
Jab kal mein Soma ki parents se baat ki mere shaadi pe ane keliye , Uncle and Aunty ne kaha agar mein uske saat rahu, lekhe jao ,wo khud ki dyan rakhe hume koi pareshani na kare tab jaa sakti hai .
Toh isiliye wo humare saat ane wali hai .

Abhimanyu :-  Achi baat hai na Bacha , tu bore na hogi .

Avni :- Mein bore waise bhi nehi hogi bhai , aap hoga na mere saat .
Maa kya baat kar rahi thi aapse ane waqt !

Abhimanyu :-  Shaadi ki kuch baate .

Avni  :- Ohh...okk...

11:00pm .
Outskirts of Mumbai .
After a long drive for approximate 90mins ,
Avni and Abhimanyu are resting sitting on car bonnet staring the sky ,
after reaching a moutain top where usually people doesn't come .

Both of them are waiting for Neil chatting randomly .
There is a famous restaurant on wheels in a distance of 10mins ,
where people are gathering having the dinner with group of friends , families and students .
Many of them are seems to be lovers though .

15-mins passed by when a car stopped infront of the
Restuarant on wheels .
Neil who smiled seeing
Avni and Abhimanyu are talking sitting far from the crowd parking the car ,
He started to march towards them .
For Avni it tooks 10-mins to walk ,
but for Abhimanyu and Neil it takes less then 6-mins to walk ,
credit goes to their height and long legs .

Standing infront of them
Neil greeting both of them sat on the bench which is situated right opposite to Avni .
Getting down from bonet
Avni smiling went towards Neil and sat beside him where as Abhimanyu is in same position still .

Smiling at Avni
Neil classped his palms with hers keeping their holding hands in his lap .

Neil :-  Sorry , late hogai thoda .

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