This is a first draft, and I'm still working on it, so a lot is going to get cut, changed, and or beefed up. I'm 85k in so far, and expect it will end up about 120, so stick with me!
There is swearing, and blood, and war, and mild sex, and basically if you're easily offended, this might not be the story for you.
I know there is currently some jumping around in POV and whatnot, so I would really appreciate your pointers if you spot it, or have any suggestions in general. This is a "digging the foundation" copy, so please do comment on what I can make better AND what you enjoy :)
I really appreciate you taking a read through, and know that it will likely be quite different than the final version.
If you have any questions I'm glad to answer them in a personal message.
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Thanks!
- Richard Harley
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The Blood of Alchemy
Fantasy*Updated Weekly* -First Draft- When alchemy is outlawed from the kingdom, those who practice the art are hunted down in an effort to end their corrupt bloodline, forcing many into hiding. When thirteen year old Tharon learns the truth about his dead...
