"They betrayed you," Sasha had said. "They left you for dead."
After the tragedy that took place in Lady Irene's dimension, the people of Phoenix Drop thought they had seen the last of Arabella. They even held a funeral for her. They certainly didn'...
Yep, two extremely pretty and awesome covers for this book!
Albeit I won't be using either of them (they're too pretty and this book doesn't deserve them), I really love them. <3
Even though Cat made that cover shortly before finding out I really don't like anime-related covers (LMAO). And Nix has never read this book because I threatened to cut off her hands and sew her to a table if she did.
(Nix, this is your cue to leave this book forever. Go. Shoo.)
Back to the contest!
Well, here are all the entries I got!
1. Kelci_Rochelle • MINECRAFT DIARIES ONE-SHOTS!! • MY ENDING TO AN AMAZING STORY
2. Cat_Does_Stories • Cat's Book of Rants&Thoughts • SKR Writing Contest Entry
This doesn't mean you're a bad writer--not at all! It was actually really good and I enjoyed it! The grammar could've used a little bit more work, but that's totally fine. I just thought it was kind of repetitive, so that's why it's in fifth place. Nonetheless, it was still really good and you can definitely improve!
I feel like you got Arabella's character pretty nicely! The whole thing was great in general (and a great addition of twenty øne piløts' lyrics) and the grammar was alright. I guess the things that I didn't like so much were the songs (unfortunately including Car Radio), because that kind of did half your work. Still--it was enjoyable and the only one with a (kind of) happy ending. :P
Your ending grasped the feeling of this book perfectly! Even though it was kind of short, your wording was great. The grammar could've been better, but hey, no one's perfect with grammar. :P I really loved this ending because it seemed like the most likely thing to happen. Keep it up!
To be honest, I was struggling between you and the first-place winner. They were both great enough to be first! The grammar was nearly perfect--there were just two or three minor errors. The plot that you used here was so interesting, and all the characters were perfect! And the best part was the explanation of the three words that make up the title at the end! <3
Like I said, I was struggling between you and Fireclaw for the first-place winner. The grammar was once again, nearly perfect, but my favourite part about yours was the originality of the plot. Unlike others, yours was the only one where she didn't ultimately die. Yours perfectly portrayed Arabella's hatred and bitterness in the book--even though she's still alive, it's still about Aphmau, not Arabella. Therefore, you've got first place. Congratulations!
Even if any of you didn't place so well, don't let that bring you down! I really loved all of your entries; it was like I was riding a feels train in each one! Definitely keep it up. All of you. <3
And that's the end of the Shadow Knight's Writing Contest. I hope you all enjoyed writing your own endings and reading others'--I certainly did!
This officially marks the end of Shadow Knight's Revenge. Thanks for sticking with us until the very end. <3
