String Cheese

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I just wanna say Hi, Deliver a note and say THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR 553 READS AND 32 VOTES!! WHOOO!!!

I know this isn't the best Bill Cipher fanfic out there, and I know it's kinda basic, and the plot is whole-ier than the Holy Grail, but this is my fisrt Gravity Falls story, and the very first thing I've ever written for GF anyway, so please, bear with me, I hope it'll get better soon. Needless to say, I'm kinda frustrated with the story. I've written this chapter over and over again, and the first draft was a thousand words, but I hated it and couldn't bring myself to publish it because it was so so so SO stupid.

I've been having a really hard time with this story in general, I KNOW it's not my best work, and things need to be changed. I just don't know what I want to do now. You and Bill are officially dating, and I don't know if I did that too soon or what.

I don't think that the plot line is believable. You're supposed to hate Bill, and that just kinda fades away, like, what the heck?!

It's important to me, as an award-winning writer that this story be the very best it can be. I won a Gold Key in the Scholastic Art and Writing Awards, and I strive to make all my writing Gold Key worthy. This doesn't feel Gold Key worthy.

If you guys could gove me ideas or feedback, it would be SO appreciated, because I want to update for you all, I just don't want to comprise quality.

Any ideas you give me will be credited. Thank you all for reading. You're all the best.

EDIT: I was two sentences away from finishing the next chapter, and I was really happy with it, and I sat here for like, TWO HOURS writing it up, and Wattpad just deleted every trace of the chapter, and I don't even know how. I'm SO MAD. I'll  rewrite it and have it up tomorrow.

EDIT AGAIN: Nevermind. I just redid it again.

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