Candor OR Dauntless? (COMPLETED)

Candor OR Daunless? (17)

Tris's POV

It's a sim, I don't know why that isn't the original test you take. That's how the society does it, what do I know I'm Divergent; I know all about not fitting in and being different. "I will set it up in a different room then come and get u" she says leaving the room.

She comes back twenty minutes later. "Ok, it's ready" she says sighing." I get up and follow her, it's a five minute walk. There's so many doors and corridors here, surprised erudite doesn't get lost. She finally leads me to a large room with mirrors, just like the aptitude test room.

"You can sit here and this is the serum" she says showing me a small blue vile. "Here, drink it" she says handing me the bottle. I tip it back and it clatters to the ground as I fall asleep. There's noises and it's black everywhere I look. I don't know where I am, I look around and realize I can't move.

"Hello?" I ask into the darkness but no one answers. I then hear whispers and turn around to see a middle aged guy and Tobias. "Tobias?" I ask walking towards him but the other guy blocks my path. He puts a gun up to my head and says "If u don't do what I say then he'll die."

I don't answer and the guy repeats himself. "Hello! STIFF, answer me" he yells. I look at him and ask "How'd u know I was abnegation?" I ask but he doesn't answer. "Fine" I say and he leads me into another room. Its blurry and I feel something around me, it's the guy's arm.

"What r you doing?" I ask the guy. "I want you, if u don't then your boyfriend will be eliminated." The guy's voice is course but it's just a whisper. I nod, being pulled in, "Ok, good girl." He lies me down and hovers over me, looking up and down. "Don't be scared baby girl" he says seductively as I shake my head.

"I'm not, I'm fine" I whisper, he leans down, kissing me. "You're beautiful" he whispers as I sigh. He kisses down my neck and I gasp. Tobias is the first thought that comes to me. The guy looks at me and asks "Baby girl, what's bothering you?" he asks. "You" I say kicking him back.

I hear him yell and groan as I run out to Tobias. I hear the guy yell and Tobias gets shot. I scream tears falling as I run towards him. "WHAT DID YOU DO?" I yell at the guy who seduced me. "I wasn't lying baby girl, I get what I want" he replies softly. "I HATE YOU" I say tackling him.

He grabs me by my arms and starts kissing me again. "NO! STOP" I yell as I rip myself away from him and he frowns. "Baby girl, he's gone, it's ok" he reassures me. "NO, IT IS NOT OK, I HATE YOU!" I say falling onto Tobias. I fall through the floor and am in another room.

Tobias walks towards me and I run towards but am stopped when I slam into a glass wall. I see him on the the other side and start freaking out. "TOBIAS!!" I yell trying to get his attention but I see another girl walk towards him. "TOBIAS?" I ask but he doesn't see me, his eyes r laid on her.

He sweeps her up and I melt down. What's wrong with him? "TOBIAS! TOBIAS!!!" I yell and he sees me but doesn't seem to care. He looks back at the girl and they start kissing then I realize that the girl is Christina. "CHRISTINA! STOP! IT'S ME" I yell but they vanish. "TOBIAS!?" I yell again.

They're gone. Just like that. I don't wake up, isn't the sim over? I'm not moving into the next room, am I trapped in my own head, my own sim?

Hey! This is a shorter chapter but it's better, the book is getting better again gradually. What do u think Tris's result is? Why is she trapped in the room? Is she finished or is she lost? I'm trying to mark up for those other days I didn't ever update, that's like 50! Haha