Candor OR Dauntless? (COMPLETED)

Candor OR Daunless?(19)

Tris's POV

It drops then sizzles, "DAUNTLESS!" the guy says. The Dauntless erupt in cheers as I look over at my parents and my dad looks so shocked and my mom looks surprised but she still smiles. My past self then walks over and sits in Dauntless. They're still cheering when I walk over. Then I get pulled into the floor again. Where am I?

I look around again and see I'm back in the sim room again. I look over and see Cara, am I really here? "Tris, you're awake" she says taking notes. I look at her confused and say "Am I really here?" I ask and she says "Yea." "How long DO u think you were in there?" she asks me and I reply "hours" I answer. "You were in there for five minutes" she answers quickly and I'm astonished.

"How is that, it felt like more than an hour" I say. "Well, I don't know but your results were..." she starts but I cut her off. "More than one" I state and she nods. "You got erudite, abnegation and dauntless" she follows up. "Yea, not surprised, I got those results when I took the aptitude test" I answer. "Who administered your test?" she asks but I don't answer.

"I'm sorry I can't tell you" I answer and she nods. "Ok, so I'll put in erudite because if you're like a normal person then I couldn't do this but since u got three and it was one of them then I can." I nod getting up, seconds later someone barges in. I look and see it's Tobias, "Tobias?" I ask almost whispering. "Tris" he says breathlessly.

"What are u doing here?" I ask him. "Looking for you, I thought that Jeanine did something." "No but I just took the IQ sim" I answer. He looks confused and I say "It measures how smart you are" I answer. "Oh, what'd u get?" he asks then says "Never mind." "No it's fine, I got erudite, dauntless and abnegation" I answer. He doesn't seemed surprised.

"I got abnegation and dauntless" he says back. "You got two?" I ask and he nods. "Ok, I'll leave you two alone and go put it in the computer" Cara says. Tobias walks up to me and pulls me up and hugs me. I hug back and he pulls away to look at my eyes. "You have beautiful eyes" he compliments. I smile and kiss him, he kisses back, wrapping his arms around my waist.

"I love you" he whispers and I say "I love you too" I answer. We pull back and he says "What's the plan?" he asks. "Jeanine wants me to meet her in her office after the test." "Which is after Cara comes back" I answer and he looks nervous. "Are you ok?" I ask him and he nods then replies "I'm fine." "Are you going to be ok?" he asks as I grab his hand and squeeze it then say "I can handle myself."

"Ok, can I come with you?" he asks and I shake my head. "No, thats too risky, Jeanine wanted u to take the test too plus she'll be suspicious." "Tris, I'm coming with you, I'm not loosing you again" he answers. He turned on instructor mode and he's not getting out till I let him. "Ok" I answer uneasy. Cara comes back and says "You can go see Jeanine now" she says, "Where's her office?" I ask.

"The tallest building" she answer pointing out the window.
Of course, Jeanine runs erudite, she wants to let everyone know she's superior. "Come on, lets go" I say grabbing Tobias's hand. "Tris, careful, there could be traps" he says being cautious. "Tobias, I'm fine..." I say but he stops me. "I thought I was Louis?" he asks slyly, "No, that's just when we're around people" I answer.

"Ok, Tris" he mocks. We get to the building and check in and head up to Jeannine's office. I lock on the door and she says "Come in" she says. I open the door and it's a large room with couches everywhere and all of the decorations are made of glass. "Is this Louis?" she asks me. "Yes but he wants to stay with me while to talk."

"This a private conversation, I don't think you're friend should be here" she states. Suspicious. "He's actually not my friend, he's my boyfriend" I answer quickly. Her face changes and she looks surprised but calm. "Ok but what I say in here impacts other people so u aren't allowed to say anything." I nod and turn to Tobias, he stands there not moving, not showing any expression.

"Alright?" she asks again to Tobias. "Of course" he replies and she nods. "Good then." "Please sit down" she says gesturing to some empty chairs. Tobias and I sit down as she writes something down on her clipboard and turns back to us. "I know who you are..." she says smirking 😏 lightly. Tobias and I freeze!😳 She knows.

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