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Review 4 ↠ You Again?

Title: You Again?

Author: @boobear_is_minexx

Genre: Fanfiction

Rating: 8.0

Hey there Angelica! Your book is quite interesting. I like the plot so far; it’s rather catchy. Unlike many fanfics that I have tried to read, you have a sturdy introduction and continue it throughout your book, which is much appreciated!

I love your cover! The girl looks like she’s falling behind the boy a little bit, almost appearing as though she’s thinking of their history together. It connects well with the book. The font used is easy to read due to contrasting colors and large lettering, yay. However, your username isn’t on it! I’ll tell you what I told the last author I reviewed: anyone and everyone needs to know who put their time and effort into writing something for others to enjoy! Try asking your cover maker to add it in or do it yourself. (: 

(Cover update: yay! your name is on it!)

As with many authors on Wattpad, I think you’ve used lowercase letters on purpose, but I’m not sure so I’m going to go ahead and address it. People will take a book more seriously if the capitalization and punctuation are correct. Titles and summaries are fine, as they almost draw your attention to the book, but chapters should be grammatically correct. Other than that, you have great spacing and sentence structure. (: 

In these first eight chapters, you’ve created fantastic foreshadowing. The reference to Tess’ abusive boyfriend, the prologue, they both create a since of mystery! I concluded that Niall and Tess reunited after being torn apart during their childhood before having to break up due to management. Harry then develops feelings for Tess while she’s still extremely upset with Niall.

This book is definitely going places. It’s intriguing and not too revealing, allowing the reader to make their own predictions. There isn’t a lot that needs work but please take my thoughts into consideration! I rated your book as an 8 because it hasn’t really gotten onto it’s feet yet and is going to definitely get better as you write. Remember your confidence girly. I’d be more than happy to write another review in the future if you’d like, just let me know when. (: