Title: Perfect Yet?
Author: @liamcrazed
Genre: Fanfiction
Rating: 8.5
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Hey Alexia. Perfect Yet is very unique, not quite like anything I’ve seen recently. I love the quote in your story description; it’s one of my favorites.
Your cover is very pretty, but it’s missing your username! By having a username, your cover becomes multifunctional, allowing people to spread it and still find your account and stories.
No grammar or punctuation issues caught my eye while I was reading. Great job with that!
Summary:
It seems as though Alexandra is an average teenage girl that lacks confidence and spirit. She lowers herself to others levels because of this and thus, hurts herself more. Lucas steps in after a particularly rough moment, almost as a white knight. She doesn’t seem to want that connection, but we’ll see how that turns out.
You’re only two chapters in, and I already love your writing style. The narration before the chapters is great. It gives serious insight into what’s coming up. This story seems kind of… bland at first, but definitely picks up with reading. I’m looking forward to further updates.
YOU ARE READING
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