A OC from my first requester

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Hello everyone. I am happy to be back reviewing. I just transferred everything from my old phone to my new one that I am using now. I am happy that you all were patient with me. I thank you all for waiting. I have tons of OCs that I have to review and I will be doing them in the order I got them. In fact, you might just see tons of reviews in the same day. Now this OC is from dancegirl222 she was my first and I did two of her OCs so far. This here is the third. I hope you all enjoy this.
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Genre: I figure since I did the other 2 that makes up Team 5, I thought I should probably do one for her!

That's perfect. Now we have the whole team.

Name: Cho Tora ("butterfly tiger" or "tiger butterfly")

Sounds like very beautiful name.

Age: 23-26

It's great to see ninjas Kakashi's age.

Gender:female

It's been a bit since I had a female OC.

Family: Koemi Tora (twin sister) Emi Tora (little sister) Jun Tora (mother) Aoi Tora (father)

Sweet it's nice seeing a family with some sisters. I believe they are alive correct? Please tell me if I'm wrong.

Appearance (Part 1): short orange hair that goes to the middle of her neck with blunt bangs, black and purple kimono style short-sleeves shirt with black pants and black shoes, wears her hitai-ate around her neck, violet eyes

I can imagine her and to me she just seems so unique and beauitful. I don't know why. She has that creativeness to her that just makes you think she is beautiful.

Appearance (Part 2): hair is a bit longer, to her shoulders now, wears an violet long sleeved shirt, with the green flack-jacket, black pants and black shoes.

It's great. She didn't change to much and because she is getting older, she is becoming more mature with her clothing style. Great job.

Personality: bossy, sassy, manipulative, confident, kind, a leader, passive-aggressive,determined, competitive, analytical

Great work. She is in the same category of traits for a personality. It is wonderful and not a trait is out of line. The leader goes great with bossy just like how competitive goes with determined. This is the way to make a personality.

Battle: lurking in the shadows, tries to stay out of the direct fight since she does better with genjutsu, can hold her own in any position

It's great seeing that she specializes in genjutsu. I don't see it much and it is underrated. It's also good that she can hold her own because if you can't then you probably shouldn't be a ninja.

Weapons: trip-wire, Kunais, shurikens, smoke bombs

These are great interesting weapons that many ninjas have so it isn't out the blue. I believe that these are the perfect weapons too sense she is mainly in genjutsu.

Past: She hides behind her loud and bossy attitude; really she's terrified to be a ninja. She became a ninja because she wanted to make her family proud because her entire clan was full of ninjas, although they weren't very well known. Cho is apart of the Tora clan, a minor clan that is known to be fierce in combat, and definitely not people to mess with. She and her family are quite close, although her sisters are quite jealous of her strength in genjutsu. It's funny because Cho admires her sisters' prowess in taijutsu. She's actually quite delicate and quiet at times which is what she truly is, but puts on a mask of false bravado, to make her parents proud of her.

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