Naruto OC reviews

OC Sprint 21 (Tori Akiyama)

This OC is by NWO_FullMetal and I hope you like it.
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Name: Tōrī Akiyama トリー 秋山

Cool name

She's the same age as Akashi's group. 

Ok

Name Meaning: Translation: Tree Autumn Mountain

Nice

Family: Kimiko Akiyama (Mother, Alive), Kane Amari (Father, Alive), Naoya Amari (Brother, Alive) 

Nice and thanks for the life status and their relationship to her.

Clan Affiliation: Akiyama

Cool

Village Affiliation: Iwagakure

Nice

Hair: Elbow length and wavy. 

Nice a OC with short and wavy hair.

Hair Color: black

Beautiful and common color

Eye Color: light brown

Another beautiful and common color.

Skin Color: White

Cool

Personality: Tōrī is a tough girl with simple dreams. She isn't really shy, (unless a guy is flirting with her then things get kind of awkward.) she craves for the simple things in life. She wants to build a life for herself and have children, but little does she know that she is destined for so much more. She is one of the oldest friends of Akashi, she traveled through Kirigakure with her parents and became met Akashi in Uzushio while they were on vacation. She's very opinionated and isn't afraid to argue. She puts up a tough act, but behind that 'mask' she puts on she's actually quite vulnerable. She's persistent and has a knack for achieving what she wants. She's impulsive and very impatient. She's very energetic very hot-headed and she is very fun when she let's her guard down. 

She sounds like a great character with simple set of things that are easy to achieve. I can just tell she would be a lovable character.

Home Life & Background: She spends a lot of time with her older brother, Naoya or at least she attempts to, but he has a tendency to treat her like she isn't worth his time. Though he does care about her, he doesn't spend much time with her and she hates it. She constantly argues over who should take their father's place as head of the clan once he passes. While she normally goes by her mother's maiden name, she doesn't have any trouble identifying with the name Amari. After her brother goes missing at the age of ten, Tōrī enrolls at Iwa Academy to become a ninja and seek out her brother, Naoya. Though her parents continued to fight with her over her decision, she refuses to let her parents stand in the way of what she wants. She's stealthy and very resourceful when she needs to be.

Oh ok, the way her personality is fits her background and family life perfectly. Great job.

As a teenager, She went rogue in order to seek out Naoya freely with nothing holding her back. She spends her days struggling day by day she became a thief out of necessity, stealing from other thieves and sometimes food markets in order to keep herself alive. She has struggled to live from time to time and at times she does pretty well for herself. She once again runs into Akashi and Shizuo in Suna. 

Nice, her persistent personality goes great with her decision to be a thief.

Tōrī often tests Shizuo's patience as she often attempts to defeat him in battle. She often underestimates her opponents and reacts upon impulse rather than thinking before she acts which often lands her in very fatal situations. Due to her lack of composure she loses to Shizuo all the time and it constantly infuriates her. 

Oh so her downfall is that she underestimates everyone. That is a Good flaw especially if it goes to everyone. Also the fact that she acts on impulse instead of thinking because it could end her dead. Good job also pointing that out.

With the tracker unit hot on her heels she's unable to stay in one place too long If you'd like to know her main purpose in the story, I suggest you keep reading. I'm working on chapter 11 and let's just say she's gonna be in it. 

Alright, I love reading Akashi's story and anyone reading this review I suggest you guys go and read it as well. It's a good story.

Specialty: Blast Releast 

Oh cool

Chakra Natures: Earth, Wind & Fire

Nice.

Jutsu:

Ninja Art:Hand Of Fire: 火の手: (Also known as Hinote in the book): This technique allows the user to turn anything they touch into an explosive, the drawback is that for every time they use it they risk the chances of their own limbs exploding so she has to be careful not to push the limits too far. For this exact reason she doesn't use it too often. 
(that goes for any blast release technique)

That's really cool and kind of reminds me of Bakugou's quirk from My hero academia which by the way is a awesome anime. It sounds amazing and has a great draw back sense she could lose a limb.

Fire Style: Ignition: This is a D rank technique that allows the user to cast a flame at her fingertips.(It is mostly used to light candles, campfires or just simply meditation and concentration usage.)

Oh ok, that's cool.

Earth Style: earth wall.

Nice, and it's a well known jutsu.

Earth style: (B Rank): Body of Iwa: this is a technique that Tori learned from watching Akashi use his body of mizu technique. It's the land of

I think I accidentally cut it off but I think I get the main idea. This is a cool technique and I love how you had her learn it from your own OC.
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Final Analysis- This OC is great and don't have anything to work on. I know she is going to be a side character in the story but she would make a really good one. Her personality and appearance goes great together and it goes great with her character all around. It was a honor to review her, thank you for choosing me to review her.
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