Naruto OC reviews

OC 104 (Tsuki Aki)

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Name: Tsuki Aki

Nice name

Birthday: November 18

Cool

Age:
- Part 1: 12

Ok

Gender: Male

Nice

Family: Mitsuo Aki ( Younger twin brother, alive ), Rei Aki ( Younger sister, alive ), Arei Aki ( Mother, Alive ), Hiro Aki ( Father, Alive )

Thanks for the relationship and life status.

Appearance:
- General: Tsuki has medium length brown hair that goes to his shoulders, pale porcelain skin, and orange eyes
- outfit: Tsuki wears his hair down, his ninja headband around his left arm. He wears a short sleeve tan t-shirt, bandages around his arms and hands, he wears black ninja pants with bandages around his left thigh where his weapons pouch is, blue ninja sandals.

This outfit and looks is really nice, I don't really see people give their male OCs long hair, it makes home different and unique.

- height: 5'3
- weight: 110 pounds

Hood height to weight ratio

Personality: Tsuki is really carefree and childish, and will joke around with most people in the academy unless he has to be serious. He likes to be very social and likes to make new friends, as he generally gets along with most people.

Oh ok so he's like a mix of Shizuko and Tenshi. Nice.

Battle: Tsuki tends to mainly use genjutsu and ninjutsu, not being that good at taijutsu. For his weapons, Tsuki uses kunai and shuriken with the occasional smoke bomb.

Ok, and good another genjutsu user.

Past: Tsuki was born in The Hidden Leaf village to a very caring family. He grew up rather normally, and as a child always was playing ninja with other kids. In the academy, when Tsuki was seven he met Shizuko and Tenshi. Immediately, he started to become their friend. He never had asked Shizuko why she doesn't speak, as he already knew that she was mute. Whenever Tsuki needed to talk to something about something personal, he first is most likely to go to Shizuki, since she didn't mind listening and then writing down some advice for him even though she's quite serious. He personally found himself closer to Shizuki, more so from how understanding she usually is, but is very close to both of them. When Tsuki was eight, his mother gave birth to his two siblings, Mitsuo and Rei.

Very nice and thanks for not giving him a sad out of control past. Also good job tying him and Shizuko together.

Other: - Doesn't belong to any clan - Isn't so good at taijutsu due to always focusing on his other skills, and the lack of physical strength.

Great job
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Final Analysis- This OC like the others are really good, I really have nothing to say because