Naruto OC reviews

OC 60 (Aidlyn Nidra)

Hello everyone and I know this took some time but it's because I have something i need to talk about. It will be in the important passage but for now, enjoy this OC. This OC is by KurushimiAkuma I hope you like it.
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Name - Aislyn Nidra

Nice name

Age - 12 (currently)

Nice, so the Naruto group's age

Species - Human

Good

Gender - Female

Cool

Sexuality - Straight

Cool

Personality - Aislyn is rather reserved, she dosen't really open up to anyone because of her clan and not wanting them to question her. However, despite not being able to show it, she is confident and sarcastic.

Thanks, and I'm sure I'll find out why she is reserved because of her clan.

Family relationships - She has a mother, a father, an older sister, and an aunt. Her older sister killed her mother and tried to kill her father, however her father ended up killing her. Later her father was killed, her aunt was no where to be found (explained in backstory).

Ok, and thanks for giving me the roles and life status of each family member.

Background summary - The Nidra clan is a clan that lives in their own small village near Konoha. Many times Aislyn went there as a kid. Aislyns father was the leader of the Nidra clan, and her older sister was going to be apart of the side branch. When her older sister realized this she attacked and killed her mother. But Aislyn's sister was unable to kill her father who killed her in deep regret. During this time the Nidra clan was being hunted down and killed becuase of their virtually useless powers. Aislyn was kept in captivity after the small town was in ruins, she escaped using her powers on the sleeping guard and found herself back at konoha. She was good friends with Shisui and he managed to get her a place to stay. Only a few months later the Uchiha Massacre happened, but because of her appearance, it ended up being pushed back a month. Aislyn is now at the academy and is going to be put on the team 7.

Why was it pushed back a month because of her appearance? Shisui died before the massacre so even if she was friends with shisui it wouldn't matter because it's not like he stopped it. If anything Itachi is the one to try and be friends with but even than he killed everyone he loved except Sasuke. The last thing is they just let guards sleep on duty? Why wasn't he switched out with a another like he would be in real life and not in a looney toons cartoon. Plus how is her sister going to be in the side branch if she was born into the main, her father is the leader so it's no reason why unless he disowned her. Ok I lied one more thing, how did she find her way back to konoha especially if she was kidnapped? How could a younger than 7 year old child know where to go and not get ambushed by other ninjas? It's just not making sense. I recommend answering these questions.

Skills - Aislyn has almost(below) average taijutsu skills, a small amount of chakra, barely any physical strength, and slightly above average ninjutsu and genjutsu skills. She is able to use only three different water style jutsu's, however her second chakra nature (lightning) has not been devoloped yet.

Ok, this is good.

Appearance - Aislyn (like most of her clan members) has dark purple hair. Her hair is tied up into a loose bun with a red scrunchie, however some of the hairs have fallen around her to form some what of a bob cut. She has bright orange eyes that she always keeps covered with bangs. She wears dark a bark blue t-shirt and her forehead protector is around her waist acting as a belt helping to hold up her dark blue combat skirt, underneath being black legging down to her ninja sandals. She has light tan, borderline pale skin, and whenever she's happy her mouth almost forms into a heart.