Just a question

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How would you guys feel if I just cut out the entire 'journal' part from the first chapter? I'm trying to edit I'm a little to hopefully give me some motivation to write again and it's work a little, but I just want to know how everyone would feel if I cut out the journal part. 

For those of you who might not know what I'm talking about the journal part goes like this. \

My name is Danielle and I am an ageplayer (cringey I know) and Cassidy is my Mommy. Cassidy is my best friend (I swear I was high writing this first chapter), we met back in first grade. She found out about my little space last year immediately found it cute. And immediately after she volunteered to be my Mommy and I let her. Right now she is at the store getting stuff. 

I've never cringed so much in my life. How did you guys even keep reading this book, it's so badly written and my updates are so fucking slow. 


I'm sorry I'm such a bad writer. 

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