Shot 2

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OMG! I seriously didn't exapected that u guys will like my writing this much. Thank you so much guys it means alot.

Thanks Annu767 for the cover picture sissy😘.Let me tell you guys one thing that all the shots i am writing are not my imagination i'm writing those shots which are suggested by you guys. Later i will think about some shots and will upload. Thank you😘
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He told me that he loves me. No it is not possible. I know i am overthinking he will not choose Juhi over me. I know very well. He only loves me but what if he chose me just because i proposed him....
No Avni don't think like that think positive.... yeah i should think positive.....

Neil: Avni.....

That is when her pool of thoughts broke as she was so lost in her thoughts that she couldn't listen to her dear hubby who has been calling her from past 10 minutes

Avni: huh...

Neil: What happened and where are you lost? Everything is ok na???

It took her some time to comprehend actually what was happening

Neil: What?

Avni: Nothing

Neil: Are u sure?

Avni: Ofcourse

Neil: Then let's go, sab lok wait kar rahe hai dinner ke liye humara.

Avni: Yeah, lets go.

Soon as they went down Avni saw the most unwanted face and the height of her anger rose.(u guys may know who is that)

Shweta: Arre,agai tum dono. Ao betho khana dhanda horaha he

Neil: Yeah. Ajao Avni

Avni: Tum betho mein abhi ati hu

Neil: where are you going?

Avni:tumhare liye surprise hai

Neil: kya???(excitedly)

Avni: i'll just get it

Avni was bout to go but stopped listenting to juhi..

Juhi: khane baad de dena surprise. Neil tum betho mene na tumhara favourite rajma chawal banaya hai pehle khalo verna thanda ho jaiga

Neil: tum ne....

Avni: kyu banaya tumne

Juhi: Neil ke liya banaya. Mene sunna tha use tumhe batate huye ki usse rajma khane ka man he so..

Avni: So? What do u mean by so...huh? Ussne bujhe bola na banane ko then why did u made?

Juhi: Cuz tuhe tou khana banana hi nahi ata na

Avni: how dare u underestimate me...(while glaring at her)

Juhi: jo sach hai vo sach hai or itni choti but ka batangar kyu bana rahi ho

All this while the whole khanna clan was just looking at both the lady who where just fighting for no reason as per them (but for us it's a big matter how can chuhi underestimate our girl..i mean tilu's girl)

By the time they where fighting bebe was gesturing Neil to stop them but he was  too scrared cuz he knows that his wifey is now angry and if he tries to talk in the middle then he will have to face her wrath

Bebe:basss.....(making both of them stop fighting) kyu larhahe ho tum dono aur Avni kya huya putter agar usne banaya to

Avni: kyu ki neil ke liye mene apne hato se rajma banaya hai. Usne itni pyar se kaha mujhe par isne mera pura surprise flop kardiya(cute pout adoring her face)

Neil:(he couldn't stop but smiling at his wifey's cute face) awwww...

Everyone stops talking and looks at hin while he receives a glare from his wife

Neil: continue continue

(At first thought to make it emotional or u can say serious type but change it)
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And about the 2nd part of the shot no. 1 i wasn't able to understand how should i pen it down, i also asked in the board and as well as in my another about it but no one replied me. Please give suggestion about that and love you all alot. Keep supporting😘😘
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26-02-2019

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