Shot 6(5)

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J: thappad marna chahte ho tou maro na i don't care...and avni suno meri baat neil tumse pyaar nahi karta..okey voh mujhse pyar karta hai so try to understand and it's not april ok it's june...aur kuchi dino mein july aane vala hai...tum stairs se gir gayi aur tumhari yeadas chali gai isiliye tum bhul gai ho that we r engaged samjhi...

A:no...tum jhut bol rahi ho (like a baby)

N: Avni...(cupping her cheeks)

A:neil she is lying na..huh

N: yes..jhut bol rahi he voh don't take her seriously.. ok

J: mein jhut bol rahi hu...mein koi jhut vhut nai bol rahi ok...neil jhut bol raha he aur neil tum itna bara jhut kese bol sakte ho

Neil goes towards juhi angry and wispers

N: juhi pls for god sake chup kar jao...avni ki halat thik nahi hai and by doing all this u r worsening her health pls and that's when reality drowned into her mind that avni isn't well..doctors warning came into her mind as flashes and she realized her mistake but it was too late

Avni was continuously thinking what juhi said and also the flashes of neil proposing juhi and their engagement day came infront of her eyes and she couldn't hold herself and blacked out...

Neil's voice broked juhi's rivary and what she saw made her panic..avni was unconsious and was breathing heavily and was continuously murmuring something

N: juhi call the doctor damn it...

J: ha..ab....abhi bulati hu

N: avni look at me open ur eyes pls...mere liye akhe khol dou pls(tapping her cheeks)

Soon doctors came and told neil and juhi to wait outside and the other family members were also on the way as juhi informed them...both neil and juhi were feeling guilty..tho neil wasn't at fault but still he thought it was his mistake and juhi she was cursing herself for the stupidity she did..

Soon everyone came and was asking what happened suddenly but none of them opened their mouth cuz they weren't in the state to answer any questions as everything happened so fast and infront of their eyes that they aren't able to register yet but soon neil came to the world and went towards juhi furiously and ....

THUD...

Neil slapped her so hard that the sound maybe heard by the whole hospital..juhi was also bout to fall but aman catched her...blood was oozing from the corner of her lips and everyone was looking at neil shockingly...his eyes were blood shot red as it may kill anybody his muscles tensed up, the blue veins can be seen everyone was shocked

Am: bhai yeh aap kya kar rahe hai...kyu mar rahe hai juhi di ko

N: diii...di kehlane ke layak nahi hai yeh aurat...aaj agar teri behen maut ke sath lar rahi hai tou sirf aur sirf is ghatiya aurat ki vajelse....best friend ke naam pe kalank hai yeh larki

J: neil...mer....meri...bhaa

N: kyu sunu tumhari baat mein...huh...bolo...tumne suni thi meri baat kinti baar....kinti baar kaha juhi pls chup hogao par nahi tumhe tou meri baat sunii nahi hai...tum tou apni hi duniya mein thi.... juhi bus kuch din keliye acting karleti aur jab voh thik ho jati tou mein khud use sab bata deta juhi....listen to very carfully agar use kuch huya na tou mujhse bura koi nahi hoga...

J: neil i'm sorry i..i didn't meant to say all that mei...mein bus insecure ho gai thi tumhe lekar...i couldn't bear anyone else proposing u infront of me....

N: she wasn't anyone else juhi she was our best f...ur best f the one for whom u can give ur life is the one from whom u have tried to take her life juhi....jahatak mujhe yaad hai voh tumhi thi na juhi jo avni pei apni jaan chirakhti thi...chahe jo kuch bhi ho u couldn't have been able to tolerate anything against avni...hamesha tumhi use bachati thi na juhi chahe jo bhi ho...chahe meri shararat ho yah phir neela ma ki daat ho ya schl mein teachers se har kisise tumhi usse bacha thi juhi...tou phir aaj kya huya kyu aaj tumne use maut ke mooh mein dhakel diya juhi kyuu

Just then docters came out and before anyone could ask him any questions he started scolding everyone...

D: kinti baar aap logose mene kaha tha ki patient ko stress maat dena lekin nahi aap logone meri baat nahi sunni aur jo socha tha vohi huya....

J: kya...kya huya doctor....meri avi thik hai na..

D: i'm sorry but....she is no more...she is not responding to our any treatments..it's just like she don't want to live...aap pls formalities puri kar dijiye taki aap use ghar le ja sake...

Everyone thought that today they will welcome her home after the accident but never thought that they have to welcome her this way only to give her final farewell...she left everyone shattered...maybe she thought that by leaving this world she can make her two best friends togther....maybe she didn't wanted to come between two of them but she never knew that if she leaves than her two best friends can never be together as the guilt will kill them eventually...thus the love triangle remained incomplete for lifetime...
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Don't know what i wrote bus jo manme aiya voh likh diya and guys can u pls suggest me some songs for writing shots tho i have request on which i'm working on and after finishing those requests i would love to write some shots on some particular songs so if have any song with good story line then let me know....

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