Shot 8

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This shot is based on the song 'Ishq Farzi' by Jannat Zubair and Rohan Mehra and it was requested by  ad_zaiditi. I'm sorry for being late and hope you will like it

And one more thing is that it is completely different from the song only the main concept is same and other scenes are completely different i hope you dont mind.
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A: neil please esa math karo mere saath you know na how much i love you...jee nahi paongi tumhare bina...kyu kar rahe ho mere saath esa please...

N: because i don't love you anymore so please try and understand...i'm sorry par mein yeh rishta aur nahi nibha paonga...

A: kisi aurse pyar karte ho...she was crying all the time

N: ha karta hu kisi aurse pyaar and is way more better than you also she is more talented than you...voh tumhari tarha choti choti chizose bighal nahi jati...she has a class a standardwhich you will never be able to reach...saying all this words he goes away to his so called girlfriend leaving behind a broken girl...

Avni falls on her knees hurting herself there but she it doesn't matter to her cause the wound she got in her heart is so big that other things didn't matter....his words where echoing in her ears unable to bear all this she closes her ears with her palm and shouts..

A:kyuuuuuuuuuuu........kyu..k...ky....kyu........kyu kiya esa...kyu...

After some months:

It had been few months but still she couldn't came out of the trauma and on the other side neil was enjoying to the fullest with his "classy" girlfriend....juhi....

Ne: baccha...avni's rivary broke hearing her mother's voice

A: ma...aap....aap kab ayi

Ne: tabhi jab tum apni kyalo mein doobi hui thi...

A: ma..voh....

Ne: abhi bhi yaad kar rahi ho use...

A: mein neil ko kyu miss karungi

Ne: par mene tou uska naam liya hi nahi...

A: maaaa....pleaseee

Ne: accha thik hai kuch nahi bolungi but beta tumhare papa ko kya bolu tumhi batao.. har roz puchte hai ki kya huya hai tumhe aur mein kuch bhi bata nahi pati cause tumne kasam diya hai...

A: mein papa ko sach nahi bata sakti ma voh neil ko mar denge aur mein mere papa ko jail mein nahi dekh sakti...

Ne: accha choro inn sab batoko...tum thori der baat ready ho jana hume party mein jana hai...

A: mumma please mein n....

Ne: tumhare papa ka order hai...

A: ok fine..

Ne: that's like my girl...6 baje tak ready rehna..

A: hmmm

It was 5.45 pm and still avni was sitting on her bed hugging a teddy bear lost in her thoughts just when ashish and neela enters...

As: princess re.....

Ne: abhi tak ready nahi hui....

A: huhh....

Ne: what huhh...6 bajne mein sirf 15 min hai aur tum hoki esehi bethi hui ho...

As: neela chilla kyu rahi ho meri beti par...while sitting beside avni in the bed and hugs her shoulder....vese meri princess ke liye 15 min hi kafi hai ready honeke liye...kyu princess...meri beti tumhari tarha 1 ghanta nahi lagati makeup karne mein...because isse makeup ki zaroorat e nahi yeh hai hi itni beautiful....

Ne: ha ha mein tou kaua (crow) jese dikhti hu na itna makeup lagta hai mujhe...

As: humne tou esa kuch kahae nahi tumhi nai tou kaha kyu princess

A: exactly.....and both father-daughter duo hi-fives giggling..

Ne: haslo jitna hasna hai agar mera beta yaha hota na tou dikhata tum logoko...

A: aapka beta konsa mahan hai batana mujhe aur vese bhi accha huya voh yaha nahi hai varna 24 so ghante mujhe paresan karta rehta hai bandar kahika...

Ne: mere beteko na bandar maat bulao bohot handsome hai mera beta...

A/As: ha ha duniya ka sabse handsome tou aapka beta hi hai...

Ne: ji ha...aur aab baate khatam karo 6 bajne ko hai main dress nikal deti hu tum ready ho jao...

A: ha ha please...saying this she looks at her father who was looking at her and again starts starts giggling

Ne: tum baap beti ko na sirf mujhse kam karvana hota hai agar mera beta...

A/As: hota na tou mera sara kaam kar deta...

Ne: ha kardeta mera kaam tumlogo jesa thori hai...

A: accha ma jaldi dou na ready hona hai

Ne: yeh le

Avni quickly takes the dress from neela and runs to washroom

Ne: pagal...aramse chot lag jayegi

A: nahi lagegi(shouts from the washroom)

As: i missed her this smiling face so much

Ne: ashish please not again

As: neela tum samaj nahi rahi ho use definitely kuch huya hai and i think i know...

Ne: kya jante ho tum...

As: i'm not sure but i think kisi larke ka chakar hai

Ne: tum pagal ho kya agr esa hota toh voh batati na

As: kahi esa tou nahi ki usne tumhe bataya par tum mujhe nahi bata rahi

Ne: mein......

As: just kidding tum tou serious ho gayi

Ne: tum bhi na

As: i know tum mujhse kuch nahi chupaogi but huya kya hai use

Ne: i think she is just depressed...iss age mein yeh sab common hai

Aa: but she is a happy go girl voh bina koi reason ke kyu depressed hogi

Ne: i think she is missing her other half

As: other half?

Ne: Aman...you twins ko zada dino ke liye dur rakha jata hai na tou akhsar esa hota hai...they starts feeling incomplete...

A: mama-papa dekho mein ready ho gayi

A: mama-papa dekho mein ready ho gayi

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(Avni's dess)

Ne: wow you are looking so beautiful

As: she was always beautiful

Ne: akhir beti kiski hai

As: akhir beti kiski hai...with a little louder voice and pointing fingers at himself

A: aap dono phirse shuru maat ho jao please....acha chalo

As: yeah let's go and starts moving out....

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