Shot 8(2)

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Oh gosh i guess i'm too late as for whom i wrote she isn't a wattpad user anymore😟😟😟😟
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They were in the way when neela asks avni a question which again remines her of her past...

Ne: avi yeh vahi dress hai na jo mein tumhare liye layi thi jis din tumhara br....
Avni widens her eyes listening to this and looks towards her father who was driving the car humming a song

A: h..ha...ha ma yeh vahi dress hai jo aap mere liye kuch mahine pehle layi thi....avni looks at neela with sadness in her eyes and neela gives a apologitic look...

Avni relaxes on the back seat and thinks of that day....

Flashback:

A: wowww ma it's soo beautiful....

Ne: ek kam kar aaj na tu yahi pehenke jana date pein

A: ma mein koi date pe nahi ja rahi...neil ne tou bus esehi bulaya hai

Ne: kuch bataya kyu bula raha hai

A: nahi

Ne: tou phir it's clear ki he is planning a surprise date...

Avni blushes listening to her over cool mom ...

Ne: ohoo someone is blushing huhh

A: ma please esa kuch nahi hai aur vese bhi use black pasand nahi

Ne: are you serious...

A: hmm

Ne: par kyu it's such a beautiful and gorgeous colour

A: i kniw par voh kehta hai ki black and white matam ka rang hai isliye use pasand nahi...he likes colourful things and in a way he is right...

Flashback ends

As: princessss

A: ha...ha papa

As: hum agaye kaha khoyi huyi ho

A: now-where

As: chalo

They were going inside when neela wishpers

Ne: sorry baby

A: ma it's ok

Ne: are you sure

A: hmm

Ne: phir chalo

They went inside and almost everyone commented on this beautiful family and after months today avni laughed truely...

Avni was sitting on bar counter when one of the son of ashish's friend came and started talking to her...

A: aree vidyut

V: ji ha mein...tum yaha akele mein kya kar rahi ho

A: kuch nahi bas esehi drinks lene ayi thi

V: wine

A: nope soft drink

V: ok...so you i wanted talk to you

A: yeah tell me

V: umm...vese karti kya ho tum

A: kuch nahi i mean kuchi din pehle mene apni studies complete ki hai

V: ok so konse sector mein jana chahti ho

A: socha nahi abhi

V: you know you have beautiful voice...you can go for singing...

A: mein aur singing no way

Flashback:

A: Pal, Do Pal, Ki Hi Kyun Hai Zindagi
Iss, Pyar, Ko Hai Sadiyaan Kaafi Nahi
Toh Khuda Se Maang Lun
Mohalat Main Ik Nayi
Rehna Hai Bas Yahaan
Ab Door Tujhse Jaana Nahi

And on the other side neil was mimicking her....just after avni turns towards him and saw him mimicking her she starts bitting her...

A: stupid i hate you

N: accha mar kyu rahi ho...ouch

A: itna bura gati hu

N: hmm...bohot

A: ahhhh...i hate you

N: yaar sachi

A: but i love singing

N: please galti se bhi singing ki taraf mat jana beizzati karaogi apni

A: huhhh...

Flashback ends

V: avni

A: hmm..acha vese tne tou mujhe gate huye nahi suna so how do you know

V: because you have sweet voice...itni acha tone hai tumhara so obviously you will be a fabulous singer

A: how do you know?

V: cuz i'm experienced...i compose songs

A: woww really

V: yeah...and i want you to sing my next song

A: bu...

V: look tum studio aa jana and phir gake dekhna agar tum satisfied nahi hoti ho tou it's all right but agar tum satisfy ho gayi then tou tumhara bhi faida aur mera bhi....believe me everyone will love your voice

A: are you sure

V: just give it a try dude...umm..yeh raha mera visiting card agar man kare tou a jana...kal...4 baje...saying this he goes away leaving avni in her thoughts..

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