I'm Re-Writing the Story + Vote

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Okay, before y'all freak out.

I'm keeping the original story still underneath the new one, I'm just adding chapters before the old one to hopefully re-write it. I honestly don't like how rushed it is and I first created it like 6 years ago.

Its time for a reboot.

Thing is though, I dont know which to do, so I'm leaving you guys to vote!

Should I:

Remake it with a little sibling instead of Hero

Or

Completely solo reader

You guys decide for me. Just leave a comment on which one below. I may include Hero in later chapters depending on what happens and if it makes sense.

That's what aggravates me about this story is how rushed and how it doesn't make much common sense and i HATE when stories do that.

For example, if your character faces a traumatic event, they're gonna have nightmares and after effects not just. Oh well, my planet blew up! Doodly Doo Doo, No!

So I'm gonna rewrite this well I have inspiration.

Thanks guys!

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