Her Name is Arciena by @Thisisru
Critique: cyraxxi
Title: For me the title is nice Hindi nga lang halata sa genre yung title but I must say it's unique.
Cover: Your cover doesn't fit the genre of the story at all,sana mabigyan yan ng action Thriller themed na feels to it's appearance.
Description: You're description of the story is eye catchy it can attract readers,but some of your paragraphs is full of periods. Like yung ibang ibang sentences palitan mo ng kama.
Prologue: I love your prologue it has so much feels and emotions to it your a great Author I must say, but yun nga may na encounter akong mga sentences na na over sa period palitan mo yung iba ng kama, Kasi hindi fitting sa sentence yung ibang periods but all in all maganda naman.
Characters: I love the way you name the leading Character it's so unique like walang kapareho nice choice of name and the way you created her is also unique she's fearless and brave.
Cleanliness: Yung mga ibang periods mo lang ang problem wala ng iba.
Dialogue and Narration: So far Wala akong nakitang mali sa dialogue and narration sa mga chapters.
Plot,Twist and Uniqueness: Hhhmmm your plot is unique ang thrilling ng mga twist like ma fefeel talaga ng readers ang tense ng story mo like prologue pa Lang nakaka amaze na
Note: You are one unique writer I love the story keep up the good work!
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