Title: Hamish P.R Ford by @SHirregular
Critizicer: serendipitygomezii
Title: For me, may kulang sa title mo. Maybe add some adjective para wholesome yung title din.
Cover: Your cover is okay naman, but make it more mysterious.
Description: I love your description! I have nothing to say!
Characterization: Detective Hamish is a well-developed character. Hindi siya nawawala sa character niya, at nagustuhan ko iyon. Keep it up!
Cleanliness: Have you ever edit while you write? Ang linis ng chapter mo! As in ang pulido! I am satisfied how clean do you write, and I salute you for that! ^~^.
Dialogue and Narration: Even mahahaba ang chapter mo (eventhough ayaw ng iba ng ganon) I am enjoying it! I love how you write the dialogues and everything!
Plot, twist, and uniqueness: Since kakasimula palang ng story mo, I could not decipher your plot. But I really liked your flow in your writing.
Note: keep this up! You have the potential to be a published writer sooner!
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