In the annals of Kaleesh history, there is not a leader more respected than Qymaen jai Sheelal. There are many things that mark the youngest khagan to sit on the throne of Kalee as a formidable leader, but the crowning jewel of his reign is his clos...
Welcome, one and all, to the Qymaili Critiques! This game is based off of the Kinesis Kritiques, hosted by dream-is-reality on her book "Vitakinesis". Your job is to answer the below questions as thoroughly as possible. If you do so, you may get a dedication and a book promotion on future chapters to come. Yes, you can be dedicated more than once!
NOTE: These apply to Movement I only.
1. Tell me about the best and most alive part of the story, and why.
2. Tell me your least favorite aspect of the story so far, and why.
3. What was something that blew you away, and why?
4. Tell me a more minor problem you had with the story (or more) and how you think it could be fixed.
5. Were you pulled in from the first page? Were you ever bored? Were there places you were skimming?
6. Any grammar or mechanics errors? Weak construction? Bad passive voice?
7. Was there a point where the pacing felt off?
8. Did the style sound nice? Was the character dialogue natural and did my writing flow nicely?
9. Give me a rant - positive or negative - about some aspect of the book.
