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By @aldcp0ptarts
To start this off,
THIS WAS ABSOLUTELY AMAZING!!!!!!!!
I was on the edge of my seat the entire time.
I was always wondering
"OMG WHATS GONNA HAPPEN NEXT"
"IS SHE DEAD???"
"HOW???"
I was so excited to read the next chapter.
I'm glad the girls learned how to rely on each other just in a few days in order to survive.
This story also had very good descriptive words.
But,
In this story Brooke seemed just a little cocky.
I know that there is a fine line between leadership and cockiness, but she seemed kinda rude to Kendall.
Also, I noticed that there was a few grammatical errors.
But just a few!
Rating:
9/10
Remember to suggest what stories I should review!
Until next time!
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