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By @Olaftown
Hi people!
So this is a pretty good book!
I really enjoy all the suspense and drama!
It's so action packed!
If you could only see my reactions to this book XD
"CHLOEEEEEE NOOOOO"
"SOPHIA WTF WHY YOU IDIOT"
"WHAT IS HAPPENING IF SHE DIES I'M GONNA BANG MY HEAD AGAINST A WALL"
Okay that was fun I'm gonna start doing reactions more often
But I noticed some flaws with this book.
There are a few grammar and punctuation errors.
And it would be better if it was more descriptive.
It should describe more about how Chloe felt when she got kidnapped like 3 times!
But one of the times she got kidnapped she was at home and then suddenly she was dropped into a body of water?
How did she get there?
Next time it would be great if you explained that maybe she rode in a car or something?
And, the cover could also use some work.
I usually make my covers with a photo editing app.
TURN DOWN FOR WHAT
Okay sorry that was really random I'm watching Dancing With The Stars and they did a dance to that song XD
Rating:
7/10
Bye!!
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