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By @Rerayswim
Hi guys sorry I've been so behind with all my stories :(
So far Collision is a great book!
I like how you told about the court order how Kelly can't drive them to the studio,
Because a lot of people don't even mention the court thing and its like WHAT HOW DID BROOKE AND PAIGE GET HERE
THEY GOT IN COURT PEOPLE
I also really like how you made Paige beat Maddie with solos.
Paige doesn't often beat Maddie so I like to see it in fanfics!
^^Why is autocorrect bothering me about the word fanfics??
It's a word!!
Sorry I'm easily distracted
But what I didn't like was how this storyline is very cliche.
It is used in a lot of fanfics.
We have both Maddie and Chloe liking Josh, which is in most fanfics I read.
I can't be the only Nosh shipper!
Come on!
There was also some grammar + punctuation issues.
But overall nice story!
Rating:
8/10
And hey it would also be AWESOME if you check out my new DM fanfic!
Sorry I'm promoting my other stories here, aren't I evil?
And check out Mack Z's new single, Christmas All Year Long!
Bye!
