Breaking Down

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By @ifeofadancer

So hey guys I haven't updated in FOREVER

Sowwy :(

I don't even know if I wanna continue this book

BUT ANYWAY THIS BOOK WAS CRAY

CRAY SAD

I WAS LIKE CRYING

EVERY CHAPTER IM LIKE NOOOOOOOOOO

WHAT WHY

HOW

NO

OKAY

WHAT

CRAP

So anyway this book has amazing descriptions and grammar!

I got lost in the book!

And the reason not too many people comment, is because they are too busy reading!

I do that all the time, I read a breathtaking book and forget to comment saying how good it was!

Anyways this plot line is very reused.

It's pretty much "the last text".

But I like I reused plot if it is made unique and different.

And it was!

I loved it!

BUT THERE'S SO MUCH DYING

But the one thing I didn't like is that Nia somehow disappeared from the story from the crash all the way until the last chapter.

And then there was a POV of two sentences at the beginning of the chapter that made no sense.

Why can't Nia dance?

It never said she was injured in any way.

I don't like that especially because it was Nia.

Nia is always the forgotten one!!!!!!!!!!!!

THAT MAKES MARISA UPSET.

GRRRRR

OKAY

RATING

9/10

YAY OKAY

BYEYEYEYEYEYEEYYEYEYEYEYEYEEEEEEEEEE

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⏰ Last updated: Dec 09, 2014 ⏰

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