Drama Queen (Dance Moms Fanfic)

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By @Idancealot

Heyo!

So this story isn't done yet so I'm reviewing this so far

GO NIA :)

In this story Nia is the favorite instead of Maddie which I like.

It always seems like Nia doesn't get leads unless they are racial and her few solos just have to be racial too!

Why can't Nia get leads and solos that don't have to do with her race?

I want Nia to have more of a chance to shine.

Anyway back to the story.

The book is very well written with good sized chapters.

It's also pretty funny how Nia puts powder in Maddie's costume XD

It's also enjoyable how successful Nia is in her dancing.

She gets a perfect score and $$$$ and I'm like

YAAAAAAY NIA YOU GO GIRL

But however,

I don't like how Nia seems a little full of herself.

I get that she is supposed to be the "Drama Queen", but that doesn't mean she should be rude.

WHY YA GOTTA BE SO RUUUUDE?

I also noticed a couple grammar errors :c

But overall this was a very good story and I am enjoying it!

Looking forward to more!!

Rating:

8/10

Okay bye people more reviews coming soon!

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