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By @chlobirdlover
Okay hi guys
So I would have done Average but I don't think it's finished yet is it?
I haven't had time to read it but so far it's great!
But I'm reviewing this story so here we go!
This story is FANTASTIC OMG
All the girls are in a fairytale, they represent one fairytale for one girl.
Wait that wasn't worded correctly
All the girls are in their own special fairytale.
IT'S JUST SO PERFECT I CAN'T
But I was stupid and didn't get that until the very end XD
EVEN WHEN KENDALL WENT TO THE HOUSE I STILL DIDN'T GET IT WOW
It was beautifully written and had no grammar mishaps that I could see.
And I like all the drama!
This has to be one of my fave DM fanfics!
But there's uno problemo.
I thought that there was too many POV's in one chapter.
Yeah I know, I'm picky with POV's, but it kept switching very often.
Maybe you could put more chapters, but with less POV's.
Rating:
9/10
Yay!
Happy Thanksgiving/Black Friday everyone!
Byeeeee!
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