Opening Crawl

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A short time ago, in a galaxy not as far away as you think....

STAR WARS

EPISODE I

RISE

OF THE TEENAGE CONQUERORS

It is a time of peace.

(Is it ever? That must be the worst opening line ever, in the history of ever. Start over.)

Okay, it is a time of unrest in the lives of Leana Ganner, Lucas Skylark, Lumina Duly, and Ben O'Connor. They each want something more in their lives than homework. They want adventure. Is that better?

(Much, actually.)

What they don't realize is that there is more to this world than meets the eye.

(Another boring line. Fix it!)

Fine! Little do they know that their world isn't the only one they can live in. The world of Star Wars exists, and it is in trouble. The end of the original six movies needs to be altered, and only the four teenagers can do it.

(Four Chosen Ones? Oops, spoiler.)

To alter the storyline, each will need to train hard. But the Star Wars universe carries risks to the four, as their presence in the story immediately ensures they have to act to stay alive, for nothing is ever the same after changing dimensions....

(Good, good. Now, cue awesome Star Wars music.)

Rise of the Teenage ConquerorsWaar verhalen tot leven komen. Ontdek het nu