Mera ishq mohabbath (completed)

Part 4

Hey guys back with the next part I will try posting until part 6 soon after that I'm sry I will be slow to update so pls forgive me and ya hope u all like my story .....so let's stop my bakbak and start the story....

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Precap
Neil going to the park to see ragu again but unfortunately she didn't come coz she was busy with the work and he became sad and doesn't know the reason and ragu is enjoying her time with the elders and children in her ngo ....and then at night ragu going to maheshwari mansion and staying with them ..... dp thinking of something is it related about ragu to know more u have to read ten story ......

Story starts from
Next day as always ragu gets dressed and goes but other maheshwaris didn't get surprised seeing ragu coz they know when ever she thinks she comes here to stay so no one questions her becoz they know her every end of the week she comes there to stay but in the morning she goes to ngo to spend time so everyone are used to it they wished her good morning and she ate breakfast and had a gala time with them and left to ngo
In Neil's house he changes his dress and comes down he has a spark in his eyes and then his mom calls him before he leaves he stops but doesn't turn
Shweta : Neil beta what u eat and go see I made ur favorite food pls at least eat this curd and go it is said that when u eat this ur going wrk will be success so before she completes her sentence he turns and sees her and she feeds him having happy tears coz in this 1 yr this is the first time he is eating when his mom fed after that what surprised her is he wiped her tears and hugged her and kissed her forehead and went .... before she could answer or do something he left from there this is the first time in this years he hugged her coz before the incident he always used to do like this and only go she thinks my son is coming back to me thank u god for changing me but I know there is a reason in his change is it becoz of a girl he is changing then I wish it's for good ....
And then with Neil he is having happy tears he thinks "in this one yr becoz of me I made my family also to suffer but now I'm being back the same person I were it's all becoz of her word in the form of the child I really want to see her I don't know y but it's like she is making me attract her without her knowledge.."
Saying this he goes to a near by coffe shop to meet someone here with ragu u can see she is in the ngo spending time and from back someone hugs her he is looking dashing and handsome not more than our Neil he is revealed as Karan Kundra in as Karan sharma ragus chikdhood bestie in the middle of the story he had gone to abroad with family so he has come again back and he knows wht ever happened in ragus life and always supports her no matter wht happens coz she is his doll they both fight as cat and dogs but can't wait without talking each other so back to story he hugs her and ragu says Jerry u r back and hugs him properly and then he says
Karan : yaar ragu wht yaar u alwocalk me jerry see how nice name I kept u as doll but u calling me jerry seriously inwhich angle do I look like a jerry for u he says and turns and  pouts she hugs him and says
Ragu : u r only the person who I have this right to call names na ok if u don't like it I want call he quickly turns and says
Karan : I'm ru doll I didn't mean like that I just said I'm sry if I hurt u doll sry thennoth laughs and hugs each other and both spends time with the ngo people and then it becomes evening
In the park Neil is there with 2 girls and 2boys they r Anurag basu and his girlfriend Prerna shah and the other couple is Arjun bijlani and his wife Neha swami ...
Anurag : buddy when will that girl come yaar want she come today also ...
Neil : don't know let's see na
Arjun : this is the think u are saying from the time we came here yaar ...
Prerna and neha : come on guys just chill na let's see for some time ...And they Nod there head...
Then Neil sees that child and he tells his friends to come and goes to that child that child also turns and sees him...
Amar : hey uncle how r u
Neil : hey baby I'm fine hw r u
Amar : I'm fine uncle so u here
Neil : woh I came with my friends here so wht about u
Amar : me came to play with friends and we r waiting for di coz di said today she will definitely come .....hearing him Neil smiles and he nods ok and the child runs and goes near someone it is revealed as ragu only he can see her side face he smiles then near ragu
Ragu : hey bachon whts up
The children be fake angry with her and looks down then she gets sad and
Ragu : so my bachon are angry with there didi not fine acha it's ok I thought of giving chocolates and I made ur favorite yummy brownie made by me but seems u don't want it it's ok I will go before she leaves all the children hugs her back Neil so her face and for him it was like time has stopped he is staring her and waiting with a smile on his face his friends are feeling happy for him that he is changing and soon will love on from his past ...
Near ragu the children : no didi we r not angry with u how can we be angry with u u r our sweet didi na so di where is our chocolate and brownie tell na then from her back Karan says with me the children says Karan Bhaiya and hugs him he kneels down and gives them there chocolates and brownie and also gives them gifts he brought them .... and they thank him and kisses them and he goes and they where playing with the kids and here Neil is admiring her plus getting angry seeing Karan with her and then after playing the children leaves waving them bye and then only ragu Karan and Neil and his friends are there ...but Neil is little in a distance but yet can here them talking he gets angry seeing something that is becoz ragu is keeping her head on Karan's shoulder and he is caressing her hair she says
Ragu : u know Karu life has changed na how I were and how I am now but in this I know now I'm happier than earlier now I'm leaving my self the way I want now I have a big family my baba ,sumi ma ,Duggu papa , ap ma ,ramu papa and suju ma and adhu bhai and pari di then kavi di and my sanky and then Shona and lucky and my dadu and daadi and dida  very happy wht more will a person want when u have a understanding family na
Karan : that's not fair doll u missed my name na
Ragu : she is gets up  from his shoulder and gets up and says who are you that's all next second he started chasing her both are running like Tom and jerry and at last ragu runs and she goes to fall but a strong arm protects her from falling and ragu in fear of falling closed her eyes and then at last knowing she is safe she opens her eyes and her eyes met to a persons eyes both have a eye lock the man is none Other than Neil she is holding her through her waist and he is admiring her and she is also seeing him and waiting at last they break the eyelock coz of Karan who came worried near ragu ... Neil makes her stand properly
Karan : doll are u fine I'm sry bachcha I should have not chased u or else u wouldn't have gone to fall na mistake is mine sry doll he has tears in his eyes then she sees him and hugs him and she wipes his tears and says
Ragu : arey I never thought my jerry can cry like this if I knew I would have died to see na that's all before she completes the word Karan slaps her and his eyes are red due to anger
Karan : dare it ragu I will kill u wht do u think of ur self ha u will die who r u to decide of dieing  ha I can't loose u ragu u r my life u r everything not only for me for our Botha family if ur baba and my baba heard this na then they would be hurt how can u tho k like that ragu u know we all love u wht extent u r our life we r living is for ur happiness bachcha ur one smile is enough to make all our worry go u r our Lucky charm u r our priority once u did a stupid thing got accident and not  again he breaks down and ragu couldn't see him crying she also cries and hugs him tight kneeling down and she also breaks Down
Ragu : I'm sry I never intentionally said it I was just joking pls forgive me I promise karu I want tell it again I also don't want to loose any one of u all u all r my life I'm sry he sees her crying and he wipes her tears and to make the situation good he says
Karan : u know wht ragu I never thought u also can cry wah re wah he says and laughs she giggles and hits him play fully
Karan : by the way ragu people are seeing us doll
Ragu : so wht let them see na
Karan : ms ragu u r sitting in my lap doll so wht will does young girls think that this handsome boy is committed to this hot and sexy girl and they will be hurt na he says and winks at her and she also laughs seeing his flirting nature and both leaves from there ..... and someone is angry for two things one is becoz she said about dieing and two for wht Karan said at last .....

Screen freezes in Neil's angry face his friends smirking at him seeing his jealousy for Karan and in ragu and Karan's happy face .....

So so hope u liked Karan Kundras character Mounika543 di u said to use a fresh character so Karan Kundra is a fresh character in my ff so hope u liked his character......and wht is ragus past or her moms past doe skaran also knows it or no to know more stay tuned ....

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