a delicious dish is made up of fresh ingredients and a well-thought-out recipe, right?
welcome to 'recipe'! wherein chef mae carefully analyzes the recipe of your preferred dish to help you make it more delectable and pleasant to eat!
in other words...
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-the first sentence after the dialogue sounds kind of misleading? i'm sure it's just me um
-i thought that it meant that namjoon's death is like food poisoning to the world if you know what i mean. maybe add something like 'the cause of kim namjoon's death-', like that? i'm not quite sure either but i think that it only sounds off to me lmao, you're not obliged to change it though.
-it might look better if you add commas in between 'family' and 'as well' then between 'wheein' and 'know'. it somehow makes it seem neater.
