a delicious dish is made up of fresh ingredients and a well-thought-out recipe, right?
welcome to 'recipe'! wherein chef mae carefully analyzes the recipe of your preferred dish to help you make it more delectable and pleasant to eat!
in other words...
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-ooooh i'm loving the cover! especially the effect that makes the text look like it's glowing which also matches jin's face wowz
description! (9/10)
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-what a great description! after reading the story, your description made so much more sense and i like that a lot!
-i just thought that 'made realization hit him' sounds a little bit off but that's probably just me.
-maybe combine some of the sentences in the dialogue? 'it's gonna be okay, you're okay now. don't be scared. i'm here. we're here.' yeah, i made such minor changes but this is just a suggestion!
