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FIRST IMPRESSIONS!
title! (4/5)
-it definitely suits your story well but i personally think that it sounds a little too basic and isn't that catchy.
cover! (3/5)
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-your cover is simple yet quite pretty but just like what i said about your title, it's not that eye-catching and seems really plain aahsjajaka
description! (7/10)
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-what you wrote is not bad! maybe add a short dialogue by bts or by her? that would most likely complete your description.
-'logically that makes sense' sounds awkward and unnecessary? plus, it's missing a comma between 'logically' and 'that'.
-now that i think of it, your description sorta seems abrupt? the last statement is my favorite though, it really brings everything together.
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