Cover: 9/10 It would look much better if 'My' was put also in the middle. 😊
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Blurb: 15/15 The flow of the story is well explained. Keep it up!
Plot: 13/15 I got kind of confused about Ellinor and Max. They are siblings yet they are in the same class. 😅
Grammar: 11/15 Some grammatical errors are a bit hard to paraphrase and sometimes, they mislead the main point of the sentence.
Characters: 10/10 When Addie and Max had a 'fight' over the chocolate cake, I was impressed by how Addie defended herself even though she knew that Max's family owns the school.
Dialogue: 7.5/10 Some dialogues lack proper punctuation marks which makes it hard to understand sometimes.
Enjoyment: 10/10 I've enjoyed reading the story. What happened to Addie was too much yet she still managed to radiate positivity for the people around her.
And a bonus (no points): I recommend re-reading your chapters carefully and checking if there are any errors first before publishing. You should also try searching other english/tagalog verbs that support a dialogue. For example, 'sambit', 'mungkahi', 'palagay' and etc. Lastly, I hope you remember and take note of the information about your story. Other readers might get confused if you failed to do so. All in all, your story was great! Looking forward to its next chapters. Bless up! xx
