Cover - 10/10 It's simple, from the font and coloring, but it's not dull. I felt the connection between the title and the cover.
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Blurb - 15/15 Amazing! Short blurb but the details provided was more than enough to hook someone's interest.
Plot 15/15 Every chapter is filled with mystery. No dull moments.
Grammar - 14/15 Double check your use of punctuation marks.
Characters - 10/10 Each character's difference was expressed well.
Dialogue - 10/10 I like how I can see the character's differences by how and what they speak.
Enjoyment - 10/10
And a bonus (no points): OVERALL COMMENT. I like how you tackled important topics such as harassment, trauma and how women should dress (which is as they please). It's almost perfect! I only advise that when changing scenes, do add large spaces between them so readers don't get confused.
