Basically when your cat is an untrained apprentice who single-handedly takes out a badger? I don't think so....know your cat's limitations! Your cat isn't Iron Man for StarClan's sake. If he fights a badger he's gonna A. Die or B. Get shredded and be severely injured.
Fire's Notes because she can-
I've seen this so many times. Just take the time to write a chapter about training! Even if it's short, just make a time-lapse that's obvious. The parts like this bother me most:
Silverheart stalked through the forest. Dead leaves crouched under his paws, and his apprentice, Blackpaw, was making a ruckus behind him. Suddenly, a badge appeared in front of them. Blackpaw jumped on the creature's back, and clawed it. He slit its throat and killed it. "Wow!" said Silverheart. "You'll be a great warrior, Blackpaw."
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Things That Annoy Crazystar About Warriors Fanfics
De TodoMay include some rants? And probably people who are not Crazystar.
