💫 Parangal mula sa Inang Hiraya ngayong 2020 💫
Ito ay ang pagkilala sa akdang pilipino. Bawat isa ay may taglay na talento, halina't lumahok at makidalo!
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DATE OPENED: SEPTEMBER 29, 2020
ENDED: NOVEMB...
Title. I will always give 5 points sa title kasi hindi madali ang mag-isip ng title for the story.
Book cover. Medyo masakit lang ng kaonti sa mata yung effects niya pero okay naman siya.
Blurb. It's kinda ANOTHER cliche story for me, base sa story description. May female lead na naman na iiwas, magtatago and here comes the male characters na pa-cold and mat-thrill sa kanya. On the other hand, maayos naman ang kanyang pagpapahayag sa blurb kaya 8 points siya.
Prologue: 14/15
It's not really cliche. Prologue pa lang mapapatanong ka na, mac-curious ka sa kung ano o sino ang character. Nice choice of words, wala rin akong napansin na wrong grammar or anything.
Agaw-pansin, yan ang masasabi ko sa blurb ni Author. New taste, new adventure, interesting sa mga may mahilig sa sci-fi.
Prologue: 14/15
Ang hirap i-pronounce ang mga ginamit niyang language/ words though it has translations. Tongue twisters siya talaga pero mababasa mong pinaghandaan, pinag-isipan ang mga ito.
My first mistake, I thought it was ANOTHER cliche and boring story about Christmas, the blurb amazed me with its uniqueness since it was mentioned that some parts of the story is based on the real life.
Prologue: 14/15
One of the best Prologue that I've read. The words that can tear your heart and make you cry, the emotions is there in every words. Kakaiba ito para sa akin. Kakaibang timplada.
It is another cliche story for me, where the main character is a thrill-seeking who will enter in an academy, where the main character found something interesting to discover. Choice of words, grammars and spellings are fine naman.
Prologue: 13/15
Maayos, maganda ang pagpapahiwatig sa sitwasyon, mapapatanong ka rin ngunit marami na akong nabasa na ganito ang panimula at malalaman mo agad ang magiging panghuli nito.
Some words are redundantly used in the blurb. Short description but still it can catch some readers attention.
Prologue: 14/15
The prelude isn't too long and not too short. Short but precise. Shokt nga ako eh lalo na sa quoted phrase. Wala namang mali sa grammars niya, may misspelled words pero naiintindihan ko naman ito.
Kulang ng mga punctuations, kukulangin sa hininga ang mambabasa dahil diri-diritso ito, wala man lang comma. The English grammar is really confusing to the point that I have to translate and don't still get the point. I understand naman na the Author ay nagsisimula pa lang. I know she can improve it naman.
Prologue: 13/15
"Love... it will just destroy everything" This is kinda look like another cliche story, same flows, honestly, I feel bored reading it. I haven't yet read the next chapters, so hoping that it'll catch my attention to like the story.
