INANG HIRAYA AWARDS 2020

INITIAL RESULTS for MYSTERY/THRILLER

This is just the initial results for Mystery/Thriller. Final Results will be posted soon.

JUDGED by moonirea

Kitten_Gray President Who Can't Be Throned

TITLE: 4/5

BOOK COVER: 2/5

BLURB/STORY DESCRIPTION: 8/10

It was nice. hindi masyado'ng nakakacurious and it was like an international novel's blurb, kasi nagbabasa ako ng ganyan but may mga mali pa rin, grammatical and spelling, be aware of that. masyado'ng marami'ng phrases na nagtataka ako kung nagtatanong ba or ano. the second paragraph should not start with 'BUT'. may pag ka awkward habang binabasa ko but there's still that tone beside it, clever and not enough.

PROLOGUE: 12/15

The intro made me curious at nagustuhan ko kung paano mo itininugma na parang tula ito. i was loving the exact part but when your english came, i was disappointed. i guess fiipino is the best for you, not that i'm saying na hindi ka na gagaling sa english, you can practice pa naman kasi ganyan talaga tayo, hindi naman agad agad na nagiging magaling sa english, but i guess you can stick nalang sa tagalog kasi maganda ka mag describe, yung words mo is very natural and good. i was shocked din sa meaning ng male child policy and i sure am satisfied with some of it.

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heihyunn Forest Feuds

TITLE: 5/5

BOOK COVER: 4/5

BLURB/STORY DESCRIPTION: 10/10

So i was really excited as i read this description, ito yung hinahanap ko e, nakaka curious and at the same time, nakaka excite. everything was there, the mood, set up, i even got theories as before i read the story and it was a superb and very calming para sa akin. there's peace as i read it and at the same time kumakabog ang dibdib ko.

PROLOGUE: 14/15

At first i was bored but the humor between the characters was never neglected by me haha, nakakagaan and although magulo minsan, naiintindihan pa rin naman, i love how you ended the prologue with a cliff hanger which is a good move kasi diyan talaga nakakaganda yung mga story, how to bitin your readers para mauuhaw sila ng update galing sayo. very good, very tempting

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SundayisBest DORA

TITLE: 3/5

BOOK COVER: 3/5

BLURB/STORY DESCRIPTION: 7/10

The set-up was meant for humor but i didn't laugh, i found myself cringed after reading the description, the formality weren't there, tho hindi talaga kailangan maging prim and proper kasi writers are known for being a rule breaker but i think it's unnecessary to put humor instead of drama there.

PROLOGUE: 9/15

*shakes my head nahh, i don't want this omg. i mean, why would you put funny things, which i don't approve lalo na sa mystery/thriller na category, it should be more onto serious tone, the voice in my head while reading this was screaming awkwardness, and i completely disagree. there was no exciting part and i hope you learn from this.

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aia1o1 Assignment: Incestuous