So, I woke up this afternoon to a comment on the latest chapter. How could Jade be in love with the boys? Sexually attracted? Yes. Love? Huh?
And it dawned on me. For me, it's obvious that Jade is in love with the boys, because I'm the writer. I know what's going on in her head. But you as the readers only know what I tell you.
I did what I hate that many writers do with erotic love stories. Sex equals love. That's not true, but that's the illusion I gave with this story. I showed you all the sexy parts (because I like writing them) and none of falling in love moments and for that I'm sorry.
This is why I love your comments. I only want to become a better writer and this comment pointed out a weakness in this story.
So, give me a moment while I go back to the drawing board. I'm not going to take this story down or stop writing it. I am going to go and see what I can do to FIX it.
Thank you so much for your votes and comments and keep it up.
Muah XOXO NC
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