Back in Time to Save You (REWRITING)

Chapter 1

Yo, my readers have used their precious time to read this fanfic novel. I edited it so it'll be less cringy and less bad grammar.

Third person's POV

Boruto is standing amongst the dead bodies with scars, broken bones, a large gash on Boruto's chest, and blood all over his body. He then walked towards the Hokage mountain, disregarding his injuries, and sat on it.

Boruto's injuries starting to heal, he looks up at the sky with his now dull eyes and looked back at his sword that has blood all over it, he grabs a tissue that's in his pocket and started cleaning it

then a voice asked "hey kit... what are you going to do now?", "I don't know, Kurama maybe I'm just gonna wait here until I die or just kill myself but I know you two won't let me so I'm not gonna do that" replied Boruto 

while staring blankly at his sword. It became quiet then a piece of paper flew by, Boruto grabbed it and looked at it then said "oh, I completely forgot that today... is my 17th birthday"

it grew even quieter "happy birthday kit/kid," said both Kurama and Momoshiki "it's no use in trying to cheer me up," said Boruto then Momoshiki spoke and said

"Hey kid, I just remembered that you could use your Jogan to go back in time-" his sentence was cut off by Boruto saying "if you're trying to cheer me up, it won't work"

"no I swear, if you don't believe me then try it out your self and if it doesn't work then you could kill me-" before Momoshiki could finish Boruto said

"Okay okay, I believe you" as he activated his eye and went to the past.

Boruto's POV

I woke up and it's around nighttime, I looked around my surroundings and saw that I'm still on top of the Hokage mountain but the village is still there, a tear escaped my eye. I got in my mindscape and hugged Momoshiki

"this is the best birthday present ever" Momoshiki and Kurama just smiled "okay now go and save everyone kit/kid," said both Kurama and Momoshiki I nodded and got back to reality. 

I quickly put my hood on because I sensed a familiar chakra, my chakra. I quickly wiped the tear that escaped my eye and just sat there concealing my chakra,

waiting for my younger self to ask me what I'm doing here and then I felt someone touch my shoulder and yes, it's my younger self I then asked 

"Hey kid, what are you ding here at night? Shouldn't you be asleep?", "well I couldn't sleep and what are you doing here at night?" asked my younger self

"I'm just admiring Konoha, why'd you ask?", "you seem a little suspicious," my younger self said "a little is an understatement kid, I look very suspicious if you ask me"

my younger self then sat beside me and said "yeah you look suspicious but you don't feel evil" I nodded and asked "why are you out here in the middle of the night? Wouldn't your parents be worried?" 

"yeah but my stupid old man won't even notice or care that I'm gone," said my younger self while putting both of his hands on the back of his head "what if he does?"

"what if he doesn't?", 'i really was a spoiled brat' i thought. I sighed and said "at least your parents are alive not like mine" my younger self then asked 

"mind if I ask. When did they die?" I sighed and said "they died half a year ago in front of my face, my village is destroyed, my friends are dead and even... she died"

"who is 'she'?" asked my younger self "oh, she's my crush and she died when we were 13 on her birthday. The worst part is that she died protecting me while I laid on the ground helplessly watch as she got stabbed in the heart by my own... stepbrother"