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Coral Awards 2021 (CLOSED)

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OPEN [❌] JUDGING [❌] CLOSED [✔] Hello! Welcome to Coral Awards 2021! The sole motive of these awards is to help our fellow writers gain more appreciation and recognition for their works. We, at TheOceanicCommunity will work hard to give all entries...

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Results - Young Adult

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Winners

                          
🥇First Place🥇

                          
Turn the Paige by Evergreen_Ebony 

                          
🥈Second Place🥈 

                          
The Laws of Beasts Book 1 by JabreelWilson

                          
🥉Third Place🥉  

                          
Parfait by chrysthh

                          
Scores

                          
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1. The prince's huntress - Kami_Goddess

                          
Title: 10/10
Cover: 8/10
Blurb: 10/10
Grammar: 14/15
Originality: 8/10
Writing style: 13/15
Plot: 12/15
Character development: 8/10
Overall: 5/5

                          
Total: 88/100

                          
Short review: The font on the cover can be changed to a lighter shade. The strong female lead is applaudable, she is mysterious and rebellious which is a great thing. The special powers of the heroine are confusing as new powers are introduced in successive chapters. The writer can add a map of the kingdoms to distinguish the summer kingdom from other kingdoms. The suppression of women is relatable to real-life events, kudos for adding those scenes. At some places where there are words like: the king said, it is confusing as if which kind said what, please edit those for better understanding. I loved the loyalty of Luis and I too want Ember to kill that prince, sorry not sorry. All the best for your writing.

                          
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2) Happily ever after - kalhixo

                          
Title: 10/10
Cover: 9/10
Blurb: 7/10
Grammar: 13/15
Originality: 8/10
Writing style: 13/15
Plot: 12/15
Character development: 8/10
Overall: 5/5

                          
Total: 85/100 

                          
Short review: The word Ali in the blurb was offensive to me, as it is used to defame the transgender community in my language. Though it is mentioned that Kiaan's mom tags him so, I found it disrespectful, kindly change that term. The reality of Indian households is explained promptly. The backward thought of Kiaan's mom is real yet irritating. I felt sorry for his dad, the poor old man couldn't support his son against his furious wife. But he gave his credit cards, I loved his dad for that! Kiaan already had suitors at 20! I was shocked at that. I loved the supporting characters of Ram and how Chitti explained the LGBTQ+ movements, well-scripted points, kudos to the writer. The Tamil terms can be translated, the non-speakers could easily understand the words like Enda Kanna. All the best to you.
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