Coral Awards 2021 (CLOSED)

Results - Teen Fiction

Winners

🥇First Place🥇

Like a dream by cynkruse26

🥈Second Place🥈

Ten Dates by shrireddy

🥉Third Place🥉

Life's a blackhole by SakshiDwivedi384

A love so blind by goldenrozes_

Angel full of flowers by writingjuniper

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Scores

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1. Disputed bonds - _aciddoll

Title: 8/10
Cover: 7/10
Blurb: 8/10
Grammar: 13/15
Originality: 8/10
Writing Style: 12/15
Character development: 8/10
Plot: 14/15
Overall enjoyment: 4/5

Total: 82/100

Short review: I enjoyed the plot but some things need to get polished. The characters of your book are amazing but I feel the side characters are quite one dimensional. Also, there are few grammatical errors that I hope you will fix while editing. Good luck writing <3

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2. Nightmare turn into a dream - Lil-Bird

Title: 6/10
Cover: 5/10
Blurb: 6/10
Grammar:13/15
Originality: 5/10
Writing Style: 9/15
Character development: 6/10
Plot:10/15
Overall enjoyment: 3/5

Total: 63/100

Short review: I liked your main character but I think you need to improve your side characters a bit. They don't hold a firm position in the story, it's like they're there to either helping your main character out or causing her more trouble. Involve their backstories, their arcs and give them time to grow and about the plot, I feel you can make it more dramatic by adding few plot twists. Also, I advise you to work on your descriptions a little bit. Good luck writing <333

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3. Intoxicated with you - samihaahmad20