@dhara88
8/10 The premise is good... The storyline is quick but does not feel bunched or rushed, it needs a good polish. The grammar and spelling are really bad with many of the sentences broken or hanging. Yet the plot strong and the characters shine making this story well worth the read. Twisty is a great description of this tale. Can't wait for an editor to get a hold of this one, it would go from an 8 to a 10 for sure.
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Tales and What I Think of Them
RandomWhat tales made the 10+/10 to what made the 8/10. These are the tales that made me cry, laugh, get mad, or just want to read them again and again. Hope you enjoy them as much as I have. Great life and Great reads to you all.
